True Love

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True Love

There is a place where I belong

A place to hold and love

Where I am strong

And when I go to bed at night

Sweet dreams fill me with delight

My love is waiting there for me

Strong and handsome

As he could ever be

So wish me well

When I am gone

I am happy there

I know where I belong



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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Love is where happiness is. Nice hub, I really liked the message in this.


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epigramman 4 years ago

....well may all of your dreams come true for you my new friend and esteemed colleague .....so these are your roots- the poetic 'roots' of a dreamer - please know that your words are appreciated by the epi-man - "My love is waiting there for me" and "I know where I belong" - hall of fame lines by a writer who makes it look and read so easy - with your genuine talent and pure heart.

lake erie time ontario canada 9:21am second cup of coffee and finally getting rid (I think) of my nasty head cold because the coffee tastes better (lol) and my head seems more clear .....


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

We all deserve sweet dreams. Thank you again for the kind words. Hope you feel better soon!


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

That's nice. Love can be described in one million words as well as it can be described with one . Once it's truthful . Thanks for sharing as I look forward to reading many more.

Bless.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

C21,

i have said this to many poets on HP so no offense...

I dont always "get" poetry....

I am not sure if i like it ...

BUT i dont hate it so thumbs up...

TH


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Sky thanks for reading. You are right about love. It can even be described with a symbol. Thank you for your genuine comments as usual. :)


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Tom LOL what can I say? At least you didn't hate it! Thanks for taking time out to read!


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

c21,

All I look for is something good to read- I rarly hate stuff I dont really "get" but hey I try to shoot straight with one eye-HA

TH


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Tom that's fine with me. I love an honest opinion. lol


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

C21,

If I wrote a poem-hahahahaHAHAHAHA...

about love- true love-

Id have to write about my wife who loved me so much and I her she was the only one to et me out of the coma....

but me writing poetry would be prolly closer to - there once was a man from Nantucket.... me write a poem... oh thats rich thats a good one...hhhhhmmmm....

TH


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

LOL I could see you writing funny poems- you're good at that Tom. That is beautiful between you and your wife. Very special.


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splitpea 4 years ago

i always knew where my heart and soul belonged, just felt so shut off from him i took wrong pathes to try to get us to open up again.. i still know where my heart and soul belong and with problems we are going throw right now- he has shown me deep inside himself theres still so much love but he's closed it up tight and if where he was at right now truely beleived it was over between then i guess it shouldn't matter what poems of love i post for him and they wouldn't harrasse me, i hold strong to the belief in our love.till the day i die. i made 1 mistake which by askin him to go costed me him- after seeing his hurt and uncertainty in me how how can i hurt him more by giving up?how would that prove all my heart felt words soul felt words are true?? so this is beautiful poem, and i know where my heart and soul belong loving him- waitin for him always waitin for him to take chances for us even though its me takin the chances, but waitin thats all i can do now is wait..tis poem touched me. it is beautiful yet again..


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Splitpea thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. My heart goes out to you and your relationship. All I know about love is if it is meant to be and that person is the right one for you it will all work out. Sometimes people are sent here just to teach us a lesson and sometimes they are our soulmate. Either way whatever will be will be. Sending you love.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

Split Pea- c21,

i have a different view as a man- and-I am an out spoken mam at that... So not that you asked but If you don't mind let me give you a stupid mans perspective-*TH waves*

SPea- go to him and explain----V

..

that you wrote the poetry

why you wrote the poems

what you felt when writing it- gauge his reaction

Tell what you feel now

what you WANT in the future

be straight forward and let the truth fly in a glorious hail of sincerity...

nothing can be gained by inaction-

Unless you start reading minds- you will have to talk to him to MAKE SURE. BUT THAts just one dumb mans perspective...

c21 DIDNT MEAN TO STEAL YOUR THUNDER BUT i GOTTA SAY WHAT GUYS REALLY THINK-

iF HE REJECTS YOU THEN "SCREW IT"- AT LEAST YOU WILL KNOW WHAT TO DO NEXT-

rEMEMBER UNTIL YOU KNOW YOU WILL NOT KNOW-

"MAN CANNOT MOVE FORWARD WITHOUT HAVING A GREAT UNDERSTNDING OF THE TERRAIN AHEAD"adapted from SUN-TSU "The Art of War"

TH


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Splitpea Tom is right if you haven't shown him your poetry or told him any of this then do it. That's the only way he will know how you feel. I thought maybe he saw it or knows this and is ignoring you. If that's the case then don't wait anymore. Love yourself. That's who's most important. I know what it feels like to give love and not get any in return. It sucks. It kills you inside. Remember love yourself first and then your true love will come.

Tom LOL you didn't steal my thunder. Any advice you have coming from a guy is all good with me.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

Sp-c21,

Even a blind pig finds an acorn once and a while....

TH


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Tom lol is all I have to say to that one.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

c21,

thats a family quote 4th generatin Hellert quote...

TH

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