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Love

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    reesecurryposted 7 years ago

    Love ending.

    Suffering beginning to take hold of me.
    Turmoil ensues for as far as I can see.
    Emotions run rampant.
    Drama never stops.

    Love destroys; it takes hold.
    Fits us into a destructive mode.

    To expect it to be is a fallacy.
    The fairytale ends as quickly as it began.

    Leaving me destroyed.

    1. AEvans profile image71
      AEvansposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Oh how sad this poem is, you should have made this your first hub! smile

    2. Justine T profile image59
      Justine Tposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Love does hert:[ an im sorry that it has to be like that but at the same time mabby the hurt is nessisary... like if you cant open up your heart to get hurt then how are you ever gunna feel the full extent of how good it feels..... But when you do an then it gets just distroyed...how long will it take to get over ?

    3. falcon64 profile image61
      falcon64posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Be strong and grow. He is not for you.

    4. aka-dj profile image78
      aka-djposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Love?
      This is not LOVE.
      You said it correctly with
      "emotions run rampant" &
      "the fairytale ends".
      That was your experience, not true love. sad

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      cosetteposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      don't let it destroy you. i knew this one guy and i thought i would die without him and it turns out he was a real jerk and after a time he tried to get me back and it felt really good to tell him to go to hell.

    6. adityasatya profile image59
      adityasatyaposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      wow nice post ,very informative
      http://tinyurl.com/ybeoncc

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    reeltaulkposted 7 years ago

    Whatever it is that has this drab of a hold on you definitely isn't because you have Loved!   Figure out what it is and move on.  God that poem was depressing!

  3. nadiaazhar profile image76
    nadiaazharposted 7 years ago

    you make me sad:(
    the poem has touched me

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    Miss Takeposted 7 years ago

    love does hurt, so much, and time is the best cure, and you are so young, so lots of time to find true love.........

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    reesecurryposted 7 years ago

    Thank you so much for those compassionate words.   They provided a small healing for my broken heart.

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    blx.contactsposted 7 years ago

    This really nice. This came from your heart

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    Justine76posted 7 years ago

    make it a hub.

  8. Cagsil profile image60
    Cagsilposted 7 years ago

    I think everyone happens to be missing the point to begin with. It's a newbie. And, it's in the wrong category. It should be in poetry? Not gender and relationships.

    Poetry does have it's own category. smile

    Just a thought. smile

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      Justine76posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      love is a relationship thing.  smile

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    cosetteposted 7 years ago
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    lyricsingrayposted 7 years ago

    cool.

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    cosetteposted 7 years ago

    the only thing better than that songs is the name of the band

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    washer26posted 7 years ago

    Love is......
    Honesty
    Support no matter what
    Not judging the other
    Not holding a grudge over past faults
    Not provoking the other to cause a fight
    Calling or texting them just to say hi
    Protecting them
    Always seeking to go the extra mile and do your very best for them
    Never getting comfortable but learning new things to keep the relationship fresh

    These are some of the things that express love. That poem is only a reflection of someone who either never experienced love or is heartbroken. Love never hurts. But a loveless person hurts.

  13. Dame Scribe profile image62
    Dame Scribeposted 7 years ago

    Love will arrive when you least expect it wink smile now smile

  14. seyi afara profile image60
    seyi afaraposted 7 years ago

    hi love 2 be a good friend with u.....A friend is someone you can be alone with and have nothing to do and not be able to think of anything to say and be comfortable in the silence.nice 2 meet u here

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      this is not a dating site.
      lol lol

  15. seyi afara profile image60
    seyi afaraposted 7 years ago

    i must tell u this is the part I hate but here he goes. I have been single for years but let me get that out of the way anyway. I am (mike)a nice, caring person who would do anything for a friend. I like to laugh and have a good sense of humor and I like that in a person. I'm easy to talk with, happy 99% of the time. I love all kinds of music...AUBURN football!! I love the beach and I love the snow! I love the smell of fresh cut grass, the sound of a baby laughing, clouds, sunsets, the sound of my mother's voice, puppy breath, and hot Southern evenings on my porch, sitting in a porch swing, rocking chairs, working in the garden, lying in the grass, Al Green in an outdoor concert, hiking, photography, going new places, a beautiful view, the smell of pine, Blue Spruce, cabins in the woods, hot baths, natural springs, flowers, Autumn, Winter, snow, catching a snowflake on my tongue, cuddling by the wood stove, painting, laughing til we cry, Celtic Music, a good book, a cool breeze, the smell of the beach and the sound of the waves, birds of all kinds, being of service, taking care of people.
    Not looking for anything more than friends~Thanx!
    Here are some writings that yantraimages recently introduced to me and I thought I would share them here. They are from "A Gift of Love"~Deepak Chopra and Friends Present~Inspired by the love poems of Rumi.
    Looking For Your Face
    From the beginning of my life I have been looking for your face but today I have seen it. Today I have seen the charm AND the beauty,the unfathomable grace of the face that I was looking for.
    Today I have found you and those who laughed and scorned me yesterday are sorry that they were not looking as I did. My heart has burned with passion
    and has searched forever for this wondrous beauty that I now behold I am ashamed to call this love human and afraid of God to call it divine.
    My soul is screaming in ecstasy every fiber of my being is in love with you AND i must tell u My arrow of love has arrived at the target I am in the house of mercy and my heart is a place of prayer.
    u can drop me a letter through my yahoo id (seyiafara @ yahoo . com) i wait to read from u as soon u get my letter.
    ( mike say so)

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    jkbensenposted 7 years ago

    Love does not equal pain and sorrow
    xoxox Author of Love_blind_bat

 
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