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  1. hunnybunny783 profile image61
    hunnybunny783posted 7 years ago

    Theres no one here I’m all alone
    I talk to people on the phone
    Even though there are people by my side
    I think of ways that I could hide
    I look at them, they look at me
    They may look but they can’t see
    What I feel in my heart
    They cant see because I’m smart
    I try not to show my feeling to them
    because they may think that I am dumb
    Things may look up just give it some time
    You can wait it’s not a crime
    So when your sitting there on your own
    Think to yourself your not really alone

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    Lecieposted 7 years ago

    very nice poem. i enjoyed it. smile

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      almendra101posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      so,,,, why don't you tell us what is it that you feel in your heart? you might not be as lonely as you think you are

  3. Paradise7 profile image86
    Paradise7posted 7 years ago

    You really caught the mood.  Good poem.

  4. Kerkedijk profile image60
    Kerkedijkposted 7 years ago

    We are never really alone if we rate being with ourselves:) I have grown to like being with me.
    Like the poem.

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    probafixposted 7 years ago

    Poem is really interesting. I like it!!!

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    Ghost32posted 7 years ago

    Not too shabby!  Reminded me of a time when a psychic at a psychic fair DID see some, at least, of what was going on inside me.  She took one look at me and announced,

    "You wear that straw hat to make people think you're a dumb hayseed."

    Busted.  lol

 
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