When we broke up I cried
But were better off separated
We fuss and fight but I
Still love you I can't deny
We used to have fun
But now we have to say goodbye
I love you so deeply that it kills me
But I just got to let it be
I still think about you all the time
I wish it could work
But it can't
And were better off separated
This is the first poem I've read today. It's so simple and the short lines really bring out the emotion behind them. The short lines to me are like sobs, short bursts of tears. I like the 3rd line where the line breaks with "but I....". I think you managed to convey your feelings quite well in this poem. Well done
So sad! Things always happen for a reason.I love your poem, it touches me. Kudos!
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