golden person

golden person...made of love

you gave so much to me when my life

was empty and cold.

I scanned the skies...

the mountains...

the seemingly endless crowds of people

intent on their own searches, mindless of mine.

every where and every day 

I searched for you....

wondering where you were.

who you were.

longing to discover the beauty of you.

wanting to discover your identity.

I searched for your love....craved your touch.

I searched for the very essence of you and finally....

I found you....

your love.

 your touch.

I want to give you something too,

something of that which I am made

as your love came from you.

I give you my love...undying and complete.

golden person...full of hope

you showed me that as well

when all my dreams were lost.

they fell to the earth...

 crashed into burning embers.

I watched as they fizzled into nothingness.

fear realized this and......

fear forced itself on me.

tightening its grip with every breath.

hope came from you.

my dreams rose up from embers

like the mighty phoenix.

hope breathed life again

as did my dreams.

I want to give you something too.

something of the dreams only I can see

as hope was seen by you.

I give you dreams come true.

you are my love.

you are my life.

I am reborn....I am a phoenix!

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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

Wow, I have goosebumps because of your powerful writing. This piece brings the reader through the journey and struggle with you and in the end, it is Love-Hope-and Dreams, that teach and move us forward.


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moonfairy 4 years ago Author

thanks for your compliment Minnetonka Twin...it means a lot and yes, Love-Hope-and Dreams do teach and move us forward. They're a vital part of existence =)


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Seafarer Mama 4 years ago from New England

Very moving, moonfairy. Your poem engaged me from the beginning and you took me on your journey with grace. Enjoyed every minute of it, and re-read it, too.


iamaudraleigh 4 years ago

Your words are amazing here! I could feel them in my soul. That does not happen often. Beautifully written and voted up :)


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Wow! You are a person of depth my friend. I got goosebumps reading this. Anyone who writes with passion and truth will always be on my must-read list. Great job!


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moonfairy 4 years ago Author

thanks iamaudraleigh for your wonderful comment. I appreciate it very much!


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moonfairy 4 years ago Author

thanks billybuc, I feel the same about your hubs and I very much appreciate your feedback!


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loveofnight 4 years ago from Baltimore, Maryland

I really like your flow, a good read indeed.


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moonfairy 4 years ago Author

thanks for the nice comment, loveofnight=)


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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Loved this moonfairy. Rich with imagery and the line "My dreams rose up from embers, like the mighty phoenix." Awesome writing. Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and interesting.


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moonfairy 4 years ago Author

thanks once again for you terrific comment Olde Cashmere, I truly appreciate the feedback!


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CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

You are a golden person, power packed and shining! And, this hub is old but gold!

Up and sharing!


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moonfairy 4 years ago Author

CrisSp...wow....thank you!!!!

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