Adam and Eve, The First Sinners

Adam and Eve ,The First Sinners

As I look around this old world today

I think of our Father's Heavenly Plan,

Of a Paradise right here on earth

And He had planned it all for man.


But created man as we all know now

Has been disobedient from the start

Adam and Eve sinned in the garden.

It must have broken Our Father's heart


God had given man his own free will

And He knew what could happen someday.

Man could follow God where He led

Or he could stumble going his own way.


Just think how wonderful earth would be

If man hadn't taken their taste of sin.

No death and no sin here in the world.

Think how how glorious it might have been.


Adam and Eve opened the door for all sin.

It was the devil's desire to be in control

He wanted the earth to be his own habitat

Satan had an evil plan ,earth was his goal..


Just think that he would try to steal from God

The Creator now has a place for him to dwell.

A place for him and all of his evil beings

And Satan knows about that fiery place too well.!


Clara Kish

8/28/11


Did you ever think of what would have been

and what should have been if man had chosen

to follow God all of the way..Man had to show

God that he knew what was best for the ones

that God had given life ,too.In all of the years

following man still felt that he knew best. He

has failed to see where his disobedience has

taken him ,to the very brink of destruction and

he still refuses the Master Who created him.

Oh, foolish man ! The fire is very hot.!



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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

A very good little poem about how sin first came into the world. Humankind seems to change very little over the centuries.


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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

Thanks for the reminder of sin and its consequence. Thanks God for His mercy and forgiveness. Jesus is now preparing another place!


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clara kish@yahoo. 3 years ago from Mt. Perry. Ohio Author

When humankind changes it never seem to be for the good,The last years have shown us of the evil they can think of and I think they now

call it progress . The world doesn't seem to think much of SIN anymore.

Thanks for your comment.love, clara


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clara kish@yahoo. 3 years ago from Mt. Perry. Ohio Author

MsDora, Thanks for your comment ,this is a very sinful world now .I never thought it could get this bad but we are sure going the wrong way now. We have to wonder how much longer God will put up with all of the sinful things going on now.It sure is not getting any better.

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