-Continued- Part II

You had your chance, you made your choice; you chose to live for me! Now give me one good reason why I should set you free. But they cried still all the louder, "please have mercy on our souls!" But satan turned to answer and his voice was hard and cold.

Why should my heart be softened and surrender to your cries, When the bible told you plainly, that the soul that SINS SHALL SURELY DIE!

And then he laughed an awful laugh that made his body shake and threw his head back on his shoulders as tears of joy streamed down his face.

But they cried, ";just give us time, to fix our hearts and to change our minds." But he answered, ";when you were called to bow, you wouldn't take heed, it's too late now!

He laughed and laughed till his body shook; he laughed with all of his might; for they struggled in vain to loose their chains, but satan had bound them tight!

They cried and they pleaded; they screamed and they moaned; they begged and they panicked, they shrieked and the groaned.

There was never a more heartbreaking sound than the plead from the souls on the Train hell bound.

And I can see the devil grin when he laughs and say, "because you sinned YOU SHALL SURELYDIE TODAY!

Now the train moved on at an awful pace, as hot winds scorched their hands and face; when out of the distance arose such a yell, "OH LOOK!";; cried the devil, we're now nearing HELL.

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rosepetal 9 years ago


Wehzo 9 years ago

Thank you rosepetal, I appreciate your comment. Thank you for visiting.

Hell N0 7 years ago

Sooooo?? Do they just die in hell or are they burned eternally? Wow, such idiotic heresy gets me giddy. Are they gonna be screaming in fire forever or just die in it. And why da hell is Satan being rewarded? You people and your hell belief.

Hell N0 7 years ago

Oh, come on. Inquiring minds must know what happens to these poor souls. It is up to you now to finish the poem. How hot is the fire? Do the people scream endlessly for god's mercy? Do they yell, please let me die. Does their skin burn off only to be replaced? (that's in the Quaran) Do demons rip them apart only for them to instantly heal? Why don't you tell us. Tell you what, you finish this poem with lots of nasty, graphic, fiery torture I will post it on my hubs for all to see. I will put it on a hub entitled, The Nastiest Creator The World Could Think Of.

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Wehzo 7 years ago from Detroit, MI Author

Hi Hell No, I must say you do have a sense of humor. First, I'd like to point out that, as shown at the bottom of the poem, I did not write the poem. Second, it is obvious to me that, and this is no disrespect, you are unlearned in the Christian Scripture. Let me try to help. The word 'hell' is translated from a variety of words. The word 'hell' which I am referring to is the one the Jesus refers to more than 14 times in the New Testament, and the one that the Apostle Peter refers to in 2 Peter 2:4. This is the word 'hell', that is translated from the word 'tartaroo', and is a place where those who die, who are estranged from God, including those 'angels who sinned', go to be reserved unto judgement. Jesus alludes to this in Luke 16:20-31, speaking of Lazarus (The beggar) and the rich man. I suggest you read this scripture.

God Bless

Hell N0 7 years ago

Jesus speaks of Hades and Gahenna, not tartaroo. The rich man parable uses hades. You are absolutely not understanding that parable. And it is you that doesn't understand scriptures. But if you are confortable with your sick hell belief, there is nothing I can say. That doctrine is clearly of the devil. I think I pretty well squash the doctrine in my hubs. I realize that indoctrinaton by the lies of christiandom is a tough thing to overcome. You will find one day (perhaps in judgment) that the things you now hold sacred are full of deception. But what I would really suggest, is that you get out of the business of teaching these lies. They are the most evil lies ever invented. And they were invented, primarily to keep people in line. The teachings come right out of Egypt. You'll notice that the Quaran is very descriptive of this place called hell, and leaves little to the immagination. They got their ideas from the same place that christians got theirs many years ago. Now the bible, is a book of translations. The scriptures (as they should be translated) teach no such concept as eternal hell or any hell. Hell and eternal are mistranslations as any 11 year old would understand that reads my hubs. But that indoctrination is an ugly thing. Let's hope that you are not actually a minister (church minister) of this horrible teaching. The Lake of Fire will not be a picnic.

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Wehzo 7 years ago from Detroit, MI Author

Thank you Hell No, though I respectfully disagree. In the New Testament there are three words that are translated into the word 'HELL' : (1) geena (Gi-Hinnom) meaning the valley of Tophet, which is the one translated in Matthew 5:22 and in Mark 9:43. (2) Hades, this word is used four times in the gospels, and always by the Lord : Matt. 11:23; 16:18; Luke 10:15; 16:23. Christ declares that He has the keys of it, Revelation 1:18. By the way, Hades corresponds with the word Sheol in the Old Testament (Isa. 14:15). (3) Tartaroo, of course this is the word spoken of above in my hub.

Have a good day.

Hell N0 7 years ago

I don't think we disagree on anything you wrote in the last hub. However, none of those words translated hell means a place of eternal torment.

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Wehzo 7 years ago from Detroit, MI Author

I agree with you Hell No, that there have been poor translations of the concept. Some translations erroneously combine two different concepts into the one word 'HELL', and that undoubtedly lead to an obscure understanding. This and other hard sayings in the Bible should be scrutinized with meticulous care and caution. I pray that you, and myself, as well as others, continue to do like the noble bereans and check it out for ourselves. Thank you again.

God Bless

Hell N0 7 years ago

You're very welcomed.

rena williams 5 years ago

where is the rest of the poem i had this poem15 yrs or more i was very heart broken when i lost it from moving about i keep it so close to me i also had many copies and shared it with friends. There is a part 3 to this poem if i can remember the words that came after saying we are all nearing hell came these words some peered out the window others fell to the floor for the pain of hell was to much to endor some i think that is right and it also had some words like as the hot fire scorched there hand and feet its been so long i can't remeber i wish i could but i wish part 3 was there because i had been looking fro this poem forever. It is awesome.God bless who ever wrote this poem. no one could have done this but God.

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Wehzo 5 years ago from Detroit, MI Author

He rena,

I got this poem about 20 years ago from a friend, unfortunately this is all he had. I didn't know there was more. I will certainly began a search for it. If I should find it I will certainly post it. Thank you for making me aware.

God Bless You and yours, 2 years ago

will someone send me the entire poem

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