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Thanks And Praise - Poem

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    Brian Iposted 8 years ago

    Whenever I join a new forum I post this first.  Hope some of you like it. 


    Oh Lord,
       I pray our voices lift you up.
    For when we're feeling thirsty
       we know you're there steadily filling up our cups.
    and we feel and appreciate it,
       of your love we want no breaks
    being shown through the Love, the Christ
       and what you gave for our sakes.
    so now we come together
       not to ask but to send you praise
    blessed be the Lord almighty
       in all ways and for all our days
    and may these words
       fill this earth for you oh Lord
    our rock, our light, our Life,
       salvation and our Sword.

    And I'm gonna give thanks and praise
       to you my Lord the most High above
    The one when I fell down
       just stopped and picked me up.
    And I will, I send my praise
       from us to you
    collectively and abundantly
       Our Love for you is true.

    And our praise will get much louder
       glorifying on your glory
    thinking hour after hour
       how can we add to your story.
    Cause to see you smile on us
       you in who we trust
    well it's enough to keep us meek when
       temptation start to peak and
    now we come together
       not to ask but to send you praise
    blessed be the Lord almighty
       in all ways and for all our days

    This is how I send thanks and praise
       to you my Lord the most High above
    The one when I fell down
       just stopped on his way and picked me up.
    And I will, I send my praise
       from us to you
    collectively and abundantly
       Our Love for you is true.

    --
    I like to start new things on a good note. and so there are no assumptions, I have no religious preference.

  2. Tamarii2 profile image60
    Tamarii2posted 8 years ago

    VERY GOOD.KEEP TRACK.KEEP POEMS IN JOURNAL......ETC.IT WILL....IT WILL...BE YOUR BEST SELLER......PEOPLE STILL LOVE POEMS.........I AM SPEAKING THAT
    INTO YOUR LIFE. ENJOYING THE JOURNEY.PEACE.

  3. fierycj profile image83
    fierycjposted 8 years ago

    Great poem Brian. I'm gonna become your fan.

  4. jjbreunig3 profile image60
    jjbreunig3posted 8 years ago

    An enjoyable piece; it's always inspirational to see others demonstrate their faith via the mechanism of poetry; I look forward to reading more of your writing. --Joe

 
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