gambling until our toes tingle with excitement

life on the edge

when we feel so much energy that we don't hesisitate to justify or complicate we just apppreciate

our minds our blind to all that they know

we have been here before and we will return here many times more

we know the feeling so well it's lady luck by our side

all things are going smooth and never have been any better

the time is right and all the words said are so charming

the world seems to have stopped frozen in time

only for us to enjoy and love forever more

when the day is over history will doubt it's only exsistence

no witnesses to come forth

only me and you and the love that's true

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\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

those words are so lovely, keep writing .......


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

Thanks for all your support and finding the time to read mine in your busy day.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

oh the pleasure is all mine


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

I like your new picture next to your name.Why the change?


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

i was writing the poem on the forum about a butterfly and an artist...... add something please

I was looking for a nice picture of a butterfly and found this little girl looking all forlorn she has butterfly's all over her but you can't see them


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

busy with work.just playing catch up.once again the picture of the girl is so cute.talk to you soon


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

hiya took the day of sick today. My mum has been dead one year today, needed some time to myself


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

I'm sorry to hear about your mom.Did you pick up your writing skills from her.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

well my mum was good at everything... i really mean that. She decided to write would you believe the first time i started to write poetry years ago. She did not encourage in anything really. I really loved her, but she did not really connect with me, I was too difficult for her, I had her intelligence up on a pedastal that i could never attain. She was not a people person, and my affection adoration etc etc etc for her was unrequited. There is so much there eh. She was a doctors receptionist, and typed sooooo fast, i have to say, i can type really fast and i must have taken that from her. My dad's brother wrote poetry actually,


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

so nice thanks for sharing.Life is to short.We live once and all people we meet change are life in some way.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

well a mother moulds our life really does she not


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

unfortunately she is not always right.If she convinces us the same fears and phobias she has we will be like her.But if she is a dreamer and loves life and all the wonders it can bring.What an incredible mom. It is up to us to decide when we are old enough if she was right or wrong.I am sure she thought she was trying her best.We can't fault her for that.


\Brenda Scully 7 years ago

no....... i have always tried to spend time with her, but everyone else was more important..... sadly we booked a holiday for her and my dad to come on with us, for the first time ever. we went on the holiday, straight from her funeral, how sad is that


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DREAM ON 7 years ago Author

You have to remember on earth we are only here in body but we will always be together in spirit.Psychics try to teach us that all the time.No one listens.Why?


poetlorraine 6 years ago

my mum loved to take pictures of everything with her video, and my dad has had lots of things put onto d.v.d's for us to watch. A lot of things we had forgotton about, we are enjoying her work, and though it is sad, she is a big part of our life still........


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

As she should be.Remember the best story is yet to be told.It is the one you hold in your head.Cherish it always and share it with the world every chance you get.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

waiting for the best thing to happento write about


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

I can't see you waiting.You just have to be in the mood.You maybe have other things on your mind.Live for the moment and never look back.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

well wrote a poem today, that is progress, have you done any writing


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Lots of thinking and dreaming.


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Joy56 6 years ago

and here i am again, thinking and dreaming still are you. Brenda. x


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Joy56 You make me feel the joy of just simple caring and happiness.I often get those tingling feelings in my toes.It feels right.Like an adventure brewing in my feet.Sometimes my feet go numb and my feet fall asleep.


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

Beautiful. You do have so many sides to you. All of them give way to great writing.


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick A long as my front side doesn't get bigger and bigger.I have to remember after on the computer for awhile get up and walk around and stretch.Exercise should be another key on the key board.Thanx and please both take care.

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