Rip Van Winkle - 21st Century

Get A Grip Rip!

I cannot remember,

When I lost my mind.

I must have gone to sleep,

To wake and clearly find,

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People are talking,

Into the air and everywhere.

To people I can’t see,

To people who ain’t there.

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It’s occurring without end,

Monotonous incessant talking.

They’re “taking care of business”,

Even as they’re walking.

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They’re going on and on,

Endlessly they drone.

They’re talking in a crowd,

They’re talking all alone.

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They’re talking into cameras,

To people who are gone.

People are taking pictures,

With a tiny telephone.

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Electricity, in my day,

Was awed and had the thunder.

But today’s technical technology,

Really makes one wonder.

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A person of the past,

Can be confused about what’s real.

As a driver sees a driver,

Talking to a steering wheel.

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While the driver recovers,

And assumes that all is fine,

A shopper speaks to another country,

While standing in a check-out line.

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I’ll resign to counting sheep,

And hope that I go back to sleep,

And again I pray my soul,

The blessed lord will keep.

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I hope that I may re-awake,

And find this spell is broken,

And I’ll return to days of yore,

When thoughtless words are seldom spoken.

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~Micky Dee~

…3-20-13…

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petenali 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Excellent! Well written and spot on. Technology, although amazing, also has many, many downsides. Human conversation person-to-person is getting rarer and rarer. Well done. Voted up!


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Hummingbird5356 3 years ago

It is true! Too many people have their phones on all the time. Even when they are being served in a shop, playing with their phones and not looking at the shop assistant. I think it is very rude.

A good poem and to the point, as usual.


Brynda 3 years ago

Perfect! what a talent...pretty soon you'll be speaking a different language than the rest of us.


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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Great poem and a unique way of expressing how the mobile phone has taken over normal face to face conversations.


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Hi, Micky.

Technology reigns though it may be frying our brains! :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

You hit the nail on the head here. Made me smile too.

You have such a great way of wording your poetry. The "guy" who thinks he knows it all and is up to the minute with the latest technology añways sounds like an idiot. You do it so cleverly-

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