Powerful emotional poetry by Mhatter99
This is an awesome poem - titled "I’m Sorry Freedom (poem)"
I was there bro I fully understand the emotion of your poetry
Thanks Mhatter99 sincerely,
@Mhatter99, That poem of yours was really something that struck a chord with me, and is some deep dramatic poetry. Its loaded with real true to life emotions felt, and it took me back to the times I was in the military, many of my friends had gone off to Iraq and some to Afghanistan.
I'm a Navy Veteran, and all of my comrade's fellow Sailors, Marines, Army and Air force personnel all go through such difficulties, and their children do as well. Leaving home for several months on end, some very unfortunate souls never to return from the filed of battle.
That image of the soldier crying in your poem is proof, that no matter how hard we may appear to make ourselves, we all have a heart, we all have emotions, have friends and love ones back at home who care for us.
I shed tears myself for those who have felt such drastic life altering affects from having to sacrifice their lives, their children's lives of all the millions of parents that are effected or some who have lose their children entirely to senseless wars year after year, to protect our country from probable invasions, its freedoms, justice, liberties, and that of the innocent.
I also shed tears of empathy for all the countless innocent victims, and families on the other side as well, whom had nothing to do with such violent warfare, and unfairness of war crimes committed and all, since many of them also had to face the inevitable fates of losing their lives as well. Plus their lives have been torn to shambles, and not because of a fault of their own, mainly because of the fault of world leaders of such places, and misled or misinformed leaders of our country as well.
I pray for a better future bro, and for all of humanity
May god bless them all to have safe passage into heaven, and may he bless all of us as well. I truly believe in God, I don't go to church regularly, but I know god is with us all in and throughout everything, and will surely provide the answers in due time.
I do believe that mankind doesn't truly know what he or she is doing as a whole, and to one another at times. So, we seem to always run off into the abyss like this, from time to time fighting many aimless and countless battles, to only return war ridden and scarred, what a shame it is. This is life on earth I guess for the moment, lets hope there will be a day to come when peace can rein victory on this precious earthly surface, and lets hope that day is soon. Amen to that.
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