Hello TarunsNet. I had a quick look at your profile page. Unfortunately it isn't written in very good English, so perhaps it isn't your first language. You need to be sure you use the right words. For example, you say you're "leaving" somewhere when it looks like you mean "living." You say " one of the most beautiful city" when it needs to say cities. Points like this make a big difference. Please don't take offence, this is meant to be helpful, so you can check things out. Good luck with your writing.