Well I checked your profile and didn't see that hub. I read some of your poems though. I did notice that you sometimes use punctuation and other times leave it out so all the words tend to blend in together. I noticed a few grammatical errors, but nothing major. I always found it helpful to take a few minutes before publishing my work. Walk away from it, then come back and read it with fresh eyes...mistakes will pop right out at you! All in all, I think you're doing great!