denden, I briefly looked at the depression hub - I can see that you have worked hard on it, but if I'm going to be honest I have to say your English needs a bit of work to make it better.
One point that stands out is that, after a full stop you need to start the next sentence with a capital letter, that would be an instant improvement. There are other grammatical issues as well, but nothing that can't be fixed.
Consider this for the beginning:
I want to share with you something that I learned from a book I have read. The book contains health information. One part of the book details the way out of depression and I would like to write about what I have learned from it. Some ideas also come from health shows on TV which discussed depression.