I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Ministry of the Semen of God. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks! Seem like a kind of Censorship.
Well, if you broke it up into paragraphs it would be a little easier to read. I had some trouble following it.
Interesting illustrations. Is that Abraham Lincoln watching sperm swim around in outer space?
Calculus-Geometry needs to weigh in on this one. LOL.
Yes it is Abraham Lincoln, the Semen of God has enter the womb of the daughter of Abraham and the Spirit of Abraham is aware of it . Jesus said the Kingdom of Heaven is within you, unless one is born again he cannot see the kingdom of God.
Thank You very much Sherry for your Feed Back, I'll give it a try.
It's just copy and paste biblical text with 'semen' replacing 'son'.
I suppose it's a good test of how desperate HP is for new pages.
The article is just bizarre, in addition to being multiples walls of text. You have a long way to go to get it published again, IMHO.
I can't imagine publication is the objective.
Apparently it was published two years ago, based on the comments. Does seem like a troll though. My teenage kids and I had a good laugh over the illustrations.
U and your teenage kids had a good laugh. Have U not read in the New Testament that the kingdom of God is within. Can you not see the logic in my illustrations. Jesus also said "Unless a man is born again he cannot enter the kingdom of God." When your father shot his Semen into your mother, you where the Christ and U got members of her body to help U build U. LOL
IMHO, translation please. Without the Semen U wouldn't even be here. Are we not made in the image of God? Doesn't God have a Penis?
Your responses seem to be semen obsessed nonsequiturs. So basically the whole thing is either a joke, or indeed bizarre. So the translation you need is just the reverse of the one we would need.
If I was a neurophysiologist I would definitely want your brain for my collection.
Um... no. God's not an actual person, you know.
I reckon there should be a category in the Hubbies for 'Most Creative Use of a Religious Theme'. This, and the guy trying to sell insurance for the rapture would be at the top of my list.
If you search for the hub's images copyright holder. A. Boyd Jr. You will learn that 'Uncle Sam Wants You to Funk with Him." Again psalms personalized for salvation of America. The Middle East has been replaced by the MIdwest or something.
"Without the Semen U yourself would not have been born." Try telling that to my Dad.
"We where made in the image of God." What? Like Invisible?
Your Dad Shot Semen into your Mom, which created U. Your Grandfather shot semen into your Grandfather and produced your Dad. And U where not excepted by your Mom body members, U had to fight your way in and out, they didn't believe U as they did not believe in Christ Jesus. Her body members saw you as enemy an invader , her body members try to take U out. U had to get disciples of your Mom body to believe in you and help you build your body.
Thanks for posting that video to your Google Plus page, now I know where that Hip Hop sample came from - always wondered. It came from the man that Hip Hop thoroughly sampled for years. I should have figured.
Either New Age nonsense or an attempted parody of New Age nonsense.
It's kind of dense and lifeless, however intended. Did nobody explain to you at school how to structure a piece using paragraphs, varying sentence length? I guess not.
There's a lot of work needed, and even then, I think the niche that you are aiming for may be be much smaller than you think!
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