As the title said, I would very much like some constructive critique on my first hub.
I try to write good fun informative game reviews for everyone.
I wouldn't have a Comments Capsule at the top of the hub.
And there seems to be a mess of ";amp;amp;amp;amp" on one of the reviews.
The reviews are on the light side. And would need accompanying images if you want to keep your readers attention.
Thanks for your reply. Comments are now at the bottom.
As to your other comments:
The amp; stuff is because of an embedded game in the blog, which RSS-feed I'm using, I don't know if it's possible to edit that in hubpages(?)
Reviews are not the main focus of this blog, it's just there to give a little more spice, instead of just download links, and a thumbnail. I personally don't need to read that much text, when it's free, anyway:-)
As for images, they didn't get imported with the feed. Am I doing something wrong?
I'm such a noob:-P
Original blog is here, by the way:
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