I'd like feedback on my article: 23 Finest, and Easily Available Antioxidants...

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article 23 Finest, and Easily Available Antioxidants Rich Food, for Your Daily Diet. What can I do to improve?
   
   I have got a message from HP team that it has ‘Spammy elements.’
   Thanks!

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      MarleneBposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I like your article. It is well-written and full of helpful information. I think it might be considered "spammy" because of the videos. Even though the videos are a wonderful compliment to the article, if videos have advertisement in them, then they might be labeled as spam. Although the videos are helpful, your article reads well and is full enough without them. That's just my little old opinion.

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         ChitrangadaSharanposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks MarleneB for your response and suggestions.
         I understand that the YouTube videos have advertisements in them. That may be the reason, for labelling the article as Spammy.
         Thank You!

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      manatita44posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      You have about three photos that are bunched together. Create one more separate capsule and also probably drop one photo, hard as it is for you. Click edit and look to see if Hub Pages are saying anything thing to you. It could be one or even two pictures that they don't like. Changing the pictures sometimes work.
      
      List all the vitamins alphabetically and them go on to the other nutrients. Delete the nuts and change the picture after it. get a more elegant one. Get a wider berries photo and put it in a different place.
      
      I have read and commented on your work and it is excellent! To my visual eye, it needs to be a bit neater. Much Love, my Didiji.

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         ChitrangadaSharanposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thank You Manatita, for your response and suggestions.
         Would look at the pictures once again.
         Thanks a lot and good day to you, dear brother!

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   AliciaCposted 6 years ago

   Hi, Chitrangada. I enjoyed reading your article when you published it. It contains lots of information. One thing I did notice though was the absence of references for the information. The article is published in the Health category. I believe that HubPages wants us to cite our sources for articles in this category.

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thank You AliciaC, for your response. I did include some genuine links originally, but I removed them, when they sent me the ‘Spammy elements’ message.
      Yes, I have noted your suggestions.
      Thank You!

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         theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Links won't be removed if they are to legitimate references like scientific studies. They will be removed if they are to general, non-authoritative sites.

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            ChitrangadaSharanposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Thanks theraggededge for your response!

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   Draco986posted 6 years ago

   Im not the most experienced compared to the other hubbers, but i feel this is very informative and well paced. Just my thoughts

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Draco986, for appreciating the article.
      Don’t think, you are not as experienced as others. We as writers, are learning every day, with each work.
      Thank you for your response!

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 6 years ago

   Thanks dear fellow hubbers, for your feedback and suggestions!
   This particular article is now featured.
   I changed some pictures and added my own pictures, added links and made minor changes in the title.
   Still it was not featured and I was getting the same computerised message.  Then I wrote to HP team to re-evaluate the article. They responded favourably and featured the article.
   Appreciations and thank you all for your response.

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