I'd like feedback on my article: I Have Social Anxiety and I Need Help!

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  1. Tom Cartney profile image62
    Tom Cartneyposted 4 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: I Have Social Anxiety and I Need Help!

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    1. Bushra Iqbal profile image80
      Bushra Iqbalposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      You should proofread your article for grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors.

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    2. OldRoses profile image68
      OldRosesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      You have written a blog post, not an article.  If you want to write a blog, please check out Blogger or WordPress, both are free.  HubPages is not a blogging platform.  They only accept magazine style articles of approximately 1,000 words answering the question "how do I..."  Spend some time reviewing the articles in the Learning Center (Help button, upper right) to learn how to write and format articles for the HubPages platform.

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  2. DrMark1961 profile image99
    DrMark1961posted 4 years ago

    Tom, this is a blog type posting. It is not what HP is looking for.
    I looked at some of your other articles. The reason that you have no traffic is that the articles are not helpful to anyone (except the short article on changing a baby´s diaper). If you want a subject like this to succeed, it should be something like "10 steps to helping people with social anxiety" or something to that effect.
    Go to some of the niche sites and look at the articles that are successful and then rewrite this or start over.

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  3. theraggededge profile image87
    theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

    You can't talk about wanting to commit suicide (because it might encourage others to do so), and neither can you promote your other site/article.

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