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Broken (Song)

Updated on April 9, 2010

 (This is a draft - my first attempt at writing a song!- please note: I DON'T SING! But i am penning this for a friend who does- your opinions would be appreciated:)


Down on my knees,
in the rainfall, feeling
so small

I stare at your door,
but you don’t live
there anymore

My body’s trembling,
trying to shake this feeling,
you cut me deep,
my love for you makes me weak

*Chorus*

I don’t wanna be like this,
don’t tell me its over,
I’m at a loss,
baby without you, I’m broken


Day by day, I’m thinking of you,
you don’t know how I am coping,
when I am feeling blue

Oh yes it is true, I am still
stuck on you,
I am fighting, although I might,
just give up, if you don’t
see the light

*Chorus*

I don’t wanna be like this,
don’t tell me its over,
I’m at a loss,
baby without you, I’m broken


All the times you said you will be there,
those beautiful nights when I thought you cared
those empty promises, you were pretending,
you lied; you stole my peace, no more happy ending


*Chorus*

I don’t wanna be like this,
Don’t tell me its over,
I’m at a loss,
Baby without you, I’m broken

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    • matt6v33 profile image

      matt6v33 7 years ago from Bangkok, Thailand

      u once again ,young lady touched my heart! very nice. u r good! :)

    • Shil1978 profile image

      Shil1978 6 years ago

      Beautiful - you are so talented!! Well done Kavita :)

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