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Rate My Song Performance - She's All Right

Updated on December 24, 2015
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Author of (Love Is Our Law) poetry book, songwriter, firefighter, real estate broker, College Instructor. 3 songs released. Yet to marry.

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(Chorus) She’s all right Intro

Woo, woo, woo, hey, hey, hey, hey, woo, woo, woo

She’s all right,

She’s all right,

She’s all mine,


Verse I

I want to talk about my sweet love,

She came in my life right on time,

We go together like two turtledoves,

From day one she was made to be mine,

We both work from nine to five

And after work it’s good to go home,

I think of her thru my rush hour drive,

I’ve got to get to her before long,


Change I

She deserves all of my attention

And where I go it’s okay if she comes along,

A couple of things that I’ve got to mention,

She’s fine and sexy; she’s got it going on,


(Break down)

Oh, she likes to give it to me, talkin’ bout her love, she’s all that,


(Chorus Adlibs I)

My baby’s all right with me,

My baby, she’s all right,

She knows I need her,

She knows I love her,

She knows she’s got just what I need,

She’s the sweet loving girl in my world,


Verse II

She has every bit of love charm,

The personality for me,

And when I hold her in my arms,

I feel the spirit of divinity,

And when we disagree,

We talk about working it out,

Simplicity is the key - to stay in love

There is no doubt,


Change II

I really love her; she means the world to me,

When I wake up she dazzles my mind,

To do all I can to keep her happy,

She was the blessing so hard for me to find,


(Chorus Adlib II)

My baby’s all right with me,

Hey baby, you’re all, all, all I need,

You’re my sugar; you’re my honey,

You’re everything sweet to me...

Rate A Dance Song

This song was written as a dance number with sincerity of expressing feelings about a lady very much in my life, once upon a time. When you rate this song, consider if it would be a hit, if is good to dance or exercise to and if the delivery was expressed well. You may leave more comments in addition to the rating. Tell it like you want to. I am open.

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Exercise Track

This is a good song to exercise to for at least three minutes. You can change positions at every eight counts of the song.

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    Paula 

    2 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    word55 from Chicago.....I am very impressed. Like this tune, the words and it's GREAT to exercise to! Keep singing! Bravo!!

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    C E Clark 

    3 years ago from North Texas

    Great Beat!

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    C E Clark 

    3 years ago from North Texas

    This song has a fantastic beat! I've been listening to the Bee Gees a lot lately and they were/are music geniuses. Your song could fit right in.

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    Al Wordlaw 

    3 years ago from Chicago

    I am grateful to you Kim for stopping by to say you "love it." Manitita, We did it. It's a hit on "Radio Airplay" an internet music playing media. MonkeyShine75, thank you for the compliment and good luck. I can especially appreciate your lady luck. Dora, thank you for your support and ever so kindness, yes, I wrote it because I like to boogey sometimes. It's excellent exercise. Suzanne, I'm glad you find this an excellent hub and will it get you on the dance floor? Jodah thanks buddy, we did it too. Our song is a hit also "On The Road to Kingdom Come" another inspirational dance track. I was honored to put music to your words as well as manitita's. Look forward to my music on one of Shauna's poems coming soon... Hello CrsSp, how lovely for you to show up. I bet you can dance your butt off too. In fact Manitita put his song that I did music to on that special ode that he wrote to you. You are quite special. Shauna (bravewarrior) yours is coming. I'm having to put a little more time into it so it is all right. Thank you for appreciating my work and presenting those precious lyrics (I'm making you a songwriter now). We should all be concerned about the natural environment. I thank the Lord for your awareness and observations. RomeosQuil, I haven't been hiding my singing talent you just have not been checking out my stuff. I have several songs posted. One is a major hit here locally, "A Proposal." Thanks a bunch for stopping by and recognizing my gifts. PegCole17, I thank you for stopping by. I was so glad to see that you had HOTD. You know, I used to have crushes on flight attendants when I used to fly. You may have been one of them when they wore those pointed caps or hats. I flew on various airlines. Flying was always interesting. Anyway, I shall continue to do music to make you dance or rock in your seats.

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    Peg Cole 

    3 years ago from Dallas, Texas

    I like the lyrics, the beat and the ease with which the listener can understand the words. You have a genuine talent for creating, writing and performing music. You know, this song sounds like something you would hear on a movie track with the young couple walking through the park enjoying the company of each other. Nicely done!

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    Romeos Quill 

    3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

    Hey word you dark horse you - where have you been hiding your singing talent man? This is the kind of easy-going tune that you could listen to on the blaupunkt on the way home from a hard day at work looking forward with anticipation to being with her indoors, that special lady.

    It's a 9-10 from me and can see already from the votes that the majority of guys and dolls rate it as a song they would listen too.

    All the best for the future and happy to put this one out there.

    Take Care;

    R.Q.

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    Shauna L Bowling 

    3 years ago from Central Florida

    I love this song and the way you put it together. It's definitely a dancing, feel-good song. This would even be appropriate to listen to in an office setting. The words flow well and I can understand them without following along with the provided lyrics. That's a HUGE plus!

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    CrisSp 

    3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

    Oh wow! So, word and music plus performance! That's fantastic!

    Thank you for sharing your talent. I look forward to seeing more!

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    John Hansen 

    3 years ago from Queensland Australia

    This is fantastic word. I love the composition, your voice and sense o rhythm. The song also has a wonderful message o devotion to a loved one. I have just had a poem performed at a Writing and Film festival, but like manatita, I would love to have you sing one of my poems. I think there are a couple that could be turned into songs. Well done, I am envious at your musical talent.

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    Suzanne Day 

    3 years ago from Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

    Interesting hub, have a brilliant day and cool singing!

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    Dora Weithers 

    3 years ago from The Caribbean

    Word, I admire your talent for composition and singing. I also like the sentiments of the song. I believe that people who feel the same way about their lovers would gladly join in the dance. Thanks for sharing your music.

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    Mara Alexander 

    3 years ago from Los Angeles, California

    You have a very nice singing voice, and your choice of words is good, and it's a well written song. Good luck

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    manatita44 

    3 years ago from london

    Well Words, I am a God-lover. As such I admire your sweet simplicity, your zest, fun-loving approach and sense of vibrancy. You also seem younger in the video. God always love a cheerful Heart.

    The song is cool and filled with affection. Won't be as sublime as some of my words, but you do not seem to seek this. Yours is a charming, cute and affectionate song for your sweet one. Very nice.

    Are you a musician? In fifty years they will be singing my poems but meanwhile, perhaps you may want to put music to one of mines:

    "A Song For my Beloved." Like most of my work, this poem is dedicated to God and will need a kind of Amazing Grace approach. Something that the Soul feels and not what the mind likes or body wishes to dance to. Give it a go. Much Love.

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    ocfireflies 

    3 years ago from North Carolina

    LOVE IT!

    Kim

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