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S C O R N E D !

Updated on November 18, 2010


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A woman spurned, a tragic lesson learned, two never returned from the limbo of love's loss, his refusal an albatross that dragged him into her hell, and left him there to dwell forevermore.....





Within the hellhole of her soul,
A beast unleashed and it took control,
Hell has no rage to match a woman spurned,
when her passion flares you will get burned....

She texted me for weeks
and begged to be,
back in my arms again eternally...
then she threatened suicide
so I threw my phone away,
but her sobs haunted me
...up until yesterday...

What a fool I was when she appeared...
ringing my doorbell as I had feared,
begging for one more kiss
and then she'd dissappear,
so I pulled her close
and held her near...

She shared my lips
and then she hugged me tight,
with something pressed
against my back....
I knew it wasn't right....
then two shots rang out
and pierced my cold cruel heart...
and then they took hers too,
now we will never

Now I am strapped
with her forevermore,
in a limbo far
from heavenly shores....

ArtWhimsically Yours studio
MFB III Productions (c)-2010


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    • Deborah Demander profile image

      Deborah Demander 7 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

      Having faced his scorn,

      His albatross worn,

      weighty on my shoulder

      his rejection like a boulder

      lost love did I mourn.

      Namaste, friend. I've missed you.

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      MFB III 7 years ago from United States

      Thanks Jen, I am unable to return the favor of your comment because there is no link to your site. but thanks so much, and as for Dream on and Always Exploring my deepest gratitude too, plus a comment on you.

      ~~~MFB III

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      Jen 7 years ago

      Great write.. as always. :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      A woman scorned is beautiful.I missed your brilliant poetry.


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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      You describe the ongoing torment between two people.I knew from the start it wasn't going to end good.