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Story: The Forbidden Door - Part 1

Updated on August 10, 2017

Rating of the story

5 stars for The Forbidden Door

And suddenly I was crossing the hidden door behind the attic, which I had never dared to pass for fear that my mother Betty regurgitated me, nevertheless this time my parents had spent the weekend at Aunt Laura's house Who would marry for the second time since her husband, Uncle Fred had died only a year ago, she said she would never marry again but loneliness was her only companion until she met Michael his current suitor. As I was saying, I was in my house with Grandfather Peter and he is now snoring in the guest room. Before I decided to go through the door I went to make sure that Peter was completely asleep and I said:

- Hello, Peter, did you sleep?

- Stop bothering me...

He was completely asleep, so I immediately proceeded to go to a new adventure, the truth is that I was very nervous and I did not know if I was also asleep so I gave myself a pinch.... I did not feel anything, I gave myself another I pinch and this time it hurt, but for any doubt I decided to take a battery to give me an electric shock on my tongue when I was going to win the dream.

When I reached the door at first I lacked strength but then encouraged me and I told myself that this opportunity would not have more than a year, so I did not think it over and I went through very determined ... with my pocket lamp Illuminated the way I stepped on and left bread crumbles so that I would not forget how to return as in the story of Hansel and Gretel.

I had been walking for more than two hours, and tiredness made me sit on a stone, I did not recognize the place, but in my opinion it was in the garden of a huge school, so I decided to eat a piece of bread and take a break to regain my strength And go home ... suddenly I do not know how but I woke up and I realized that I had fallen asleep and I do not know for how long I was like this, look at my watch but this was stopped.

This story will continue ...


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© 2017 Guillermo Perez Guillen


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