I Will Edit Grammar, Spelling in ONE of your hubs

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   melbelposted 7 years ago

   I'm really bored.
   
   Link me ONE of your hubs and I will let you know if I see mistakes in it and suggest corrections.

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      kenneth averyposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      @ melbel, right now I cannot think of one. But I will surely keep your sweet offer in mind. Thank you.

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      vocalcoachposted 7 years agoin reply to this

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      I'm happy to send you one one of minr me;;http://hubpages.com/_1ictfyqvgguwn/health/Improving-Your-Health-One-Hug-at-a-Time
      
      This will b fun and thansks so muchj!

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         hclpdposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Please tell you you were drunk when you typed all this.

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            kenneth averyposted 7 years agoin reply to this

            @hclpd,
            In my time on earth, I have seen a lot of things performed by mortals who were sober. This is one of them.

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         melbelposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         In this sentence:
         Take a nice deep breath and hold the hug for 25 seconds, remembering to breath during the process
         
         Change breath to breathe
         
         Your body will relax and "let-go".
         
         Change let-go to let go
         
         There are others ways to hug yourself besides the physical hug:
         
         Change besides to beside
         
         When we "see the glass as half-full" instead of half-empty, we actually set up the conditions needed for living a healthy life-style.
         
         Change life-style to lifestyle
         
         Your physical energy and over-all health depends on exercising your heart muscle.
         
         Change over-all to overall
         Change depends to depend
         
         Then I read somewhere that adding a slice of cucumber might help. . .and sure enough, it did
         
         Change to
         Then I read somewhere that adding a slice of cucumber might help and sure enough, it did
         
         Another trick I use is to add organic 100% cranbury juice. It is all natural with no sugar or sweetner, so if you try this be sure to delute it with plenty of water and a kick of stevia.
         
         Change cranbury to cranberry
         Change sweetner to sweetener
         Change delute to dilute
         
         Eating nutrionally is a mind-set.
         Change nutrionally to nutritionally
         Change mind-set to mindset
         
         Its fun, rewarding and healthier than purchasing these foods at the market. Planting from seeds is a great money-saver. And you can use an egg-container to start your seeds.
         
         Change Its to It's
         Change Planting from seeds to Planting seeds
         Change egg-container to egg container
         
         The best way to apply a healthy dose of self love is to try the following:
         Change self love to self-love
         
         Change the last photo or it won't be added to a new hub site.

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            vocalcoachposted 7 years agoin reply to this

            Thank you so very much for editing my hub.  I'm making the necessary changes with a grateful heart.

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      hclpdposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for doing this. I was looking for someone who could point out the mistakes for me. Please let me know what do you think of the following hub -
      
      http://hubpages.com/entertainment/Best-Netflix-Shows 
      
      What more could I do to improve its chances of being moved to a niche site?

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         melbelposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         I would get rid of almost all of the youtube videos. Just my opinion.
         
         Okay so grammar and spelling:
         Netflix has proved its mettle over the course of last couple of years
         
         the last couple of years
         
         Change catalogue to catalog
         
         Over the course of last couple of years
         You forgot "the" again
         
         The thought-provoking mini-stories are going to stay with you for a long time, leaving you with a lot questions swirling around in your head - questions that are impossible to answer.
         
         a lot of questions
         
         If it flew under you radar somehow, now is the time to catch up on this show before its 4th season.
         
         your radar
         
         Unfortunately, Jessica's past catchers up with her
         catches
         
         it's going to be a very busy year for Marvel fans..
         it's going to be a very busy year for Marvel fans.
         
         The story revolved round a wrongly imprisoned man, who becomes a super strong
         around
         
         I was skeptical when I heard that Netflix has green light to a Jessica Jones' spin-off.
         Change to:
         I was skeptical when I heard that Netflix had the greenlight for a Jessica Jones' spin-off.
         
         How far he would go to get what he wants?
         Change to
         How far would he go to get what he wants?
         
         In a town where everyone has their own secretes, would the killer be brought to justice?
         secrets
         
         Based upon a true story, Narcos follows the conflict between
         Based on a true story, Narcos follows the conflict between
         
         He might be ruthless when it comes to drug business
         He might be ruthless when it comes to the drug business
         
         Brazilian actor , shines in his role as Pablo
         Brazilian actor, shines in his role as Pablo
         
         8 strangers from different part of the world with a strange
         8 strangers from different parts of the world with a strange
         
         Prepare to be drawn into a whole new world of privilege, power and politics.
         Prepare to be drawn into a whole new world of privilege, power, and politics.
         
         the first 11 episodes is incredibly suspenseful and entertaining
         the first 11 episodes are incredibly suspenseful and entertaining
         
         watch the first season, which consist of 6 short episodes
         watch the first season, which consists of 6 short episodes
         
         The writing, animation and voice acting are expertly done
         The writing, animation, and voice acting are expertly done
         
         The writing, animation and voice acting are expertly done
         The writing, animation, and voice acting are expertly done
         
         Based upon a series of novels by the same name,
         Based on a series of novels by the same name,
         
         The story revolves round Marco Polo
         The story revolves around Marco Polo
         
         a famed explorer from 13th century
         a famed explorer from the 13th century
         
         himself in the middle of power struggle between
         himself in the middle of a power struggle between
         or even
         himself in the middle of the power struggle between

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