Just redid my profile. Suggestions for improvement?
Hi, Lori!
You have included a lot of information on your profile page, and I think that you have done a great job. I think that there is nothing more to be added, but then again you are the only one who can know this, right?
You really have a lot of experience
- Website Examinerposted 12 years ago
0 - kate-olsonposted 12 years ago0
It looks very nice and well organized. The only suggestion I might have is to make your first sentence more captivating and interesting. Perhaps share a funny quirk that you have or a unique fact about you. But you don't have to listen to my advice
Thanks everyone. Kate, I appreciate the advice. I will look at it this week and see if I can spice it up a bit. Writing 101 - hook 'em with that first line
It's so hard to see these things in your own writing sometimes, so I appreciate the help.
Lori
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