Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: The Story of Hero Born (must be signed in to view)
Not only this but the rest 5 articles also
You want us to review six articles? One at a time, please.
The problem is your English language skills. They are not yet up to the high standard required by HubPages. I'm sure that will be the problem with your other articles too.
Images have to be free of copyright restrictions. At least one of your is clearly watermarked so that means you can't use without permission of the owner and, probably, payment of a fee.
But, the English grammar errors are the most serious issue.
I have changed it through grammarly then also error
Have you edited the above link? If so, it still wouldn't cut it.
Though the adverts say otherwise, Grammarly is at best an editing tool, even with the pro version. It wouldn't capture every error. Sometimes it prompts the wrong thing. It wouldn't edit information flow or logic too.
What I'm saying is, you still need to have a certain level of English proficiency in order to benefit from Grammarly.
With all due respect, if you're serious about writing here, and earning, take some time to improve your English. Read, examine, practice, etc. There are hundreds of thousands of well-written English articles online. Thousands of tutorials too. For a start, pay attention to basic areas like:
- Punctuation
- Subject verb agreement
- Caps
- Rambling sentences
- Convoluted and awkward expressions. For eg, " in a city in the cities of California" simply needs to be "in a Californian city."
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