Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: Mesothelioma Attorney in California
The main problem is probably that the article is short and appears to be solely designed to promote a particular lawyer. It's unlikely that such a promotional article will be accepted.
Some other points to consider are the spelling mistakes in the article (such as the spelling of asbestos, membranes, and abdominal), some English errors, and the fact that "Google Photos" isn't a suitable source for photos. In addition, since you've included health facts, you need to add authoritative references for them. I doubt whether correcting these problems will be useful while you are promoting the lawyer, however.
Various problems:
1. thin content. Your article is about an attorney in California, but you spend very little of your article on this. The rest is spent describing meso... but in that section you provide just a bit of information about it, so overall your article provides nothing too useful or informative.
2. photos are too small and are not properly sourced. Just because you found them on Google does not mean you can use them.
3. Spelling mistakes. For example: asbesto instead of asbestos.
4. Mistakes of style. For example
This paragraph is long winded. You do not need to say "in human knowledge" or say "stated under..". A better example would be "There are three basic types of ...." and then list them.
5. You are spamming the site by trying to promote a specific lawyer. You might say that this is like mesothelioma for your article. It's fatal. It will not be published. It is dead.
This might have worked about 10 or 12 years ago. There is no way it is going to fly at this time for all of the reasons listed by the other posters. Just delete it and move one.
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