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ADDICT Scene 2

Updated on April 27, 2011

The Fall...

The Fall...

Genesis 3 v:1-6

 1Now the serpent was more subtil than any beast of the field which the LORD God had made. And he said unto the woman, Yea, hath God said, Ye shall not eat of every tree of the garden?

 2And the woman said unto the serpent, We may eat of the fruit of the trees of the garden:

 3But of the fruit of the tree which is in the midst of the garden, God hath said, Ye shall not eat of it, neither shall ye touch it, lest ye die.

 4And the serpent said unto the woman, Ye shall not surely die:

 5For God doth know that in the day ye eat thereof, then your eyes shall be opened, and ye shall be as gods, knowing good and evil.

 6And when the woman saw that the tree was good for food, and that it was pleasant to the eyes, and a tree to be desired to make one wise, she took of the fruit thereof, and did eat, and gave also unto her husband with her; and he did eat.

INT. DELANA’S MOTHER’S APARTMENT-DAY               

 

DISSOLVE into sixteen-year-old T and seventeen-year-old Delana having sex so loudly that they wake up Delana’s son in the next room, who starts crying.

 

T

   SHUT THAT LITTLE NIGGA’ UP D I’M TRYIN’TO

   GET MINE!

 

Delana jumps out of bed, puts on a robe and tends to her son with a bottle of milk, the two year old falls back asleep.

 

DELANA                             

Sorry baby, he was just hungry, and don’t be callin’ my

little man no nigga’.

 

Delana takes off her robe, gets back in bed next to T, who is smoking a joint, then passes the jointto Delana. There is 40oz. bottle of OLE ENGLISH 800 malt liquor on a nightstand next to the bed.

T

Whatever slut, I’m pissed off now, I ain’t even gonna’

            finish doin’ you now. Anyway I got something

more important for you to do. I know you wanna’

screw the preacher boy,I know you wanna’

tear his virgin behind up don’t you?

 

Delana’s eyes light up as she squeals so loudly, she almost wakes up her baby who begins to move around in his crib.

 

DELANA

(whispering)

 He’s a virgin!!!!  That fine young boy is a virgin?

 

 T

What else would that holy nigga’ be, that punk ain’t

had no coochie since coochie had him! All that boy do is

read the bible, play ball, do that Karate mess,

go to school and try to save every body soul,

like he think he JESUS CHRIST HIMSELF! I HATE THAT NIGGER!

 

    DELANA                         

        (salivating)

              He know Karate too?  So whats up T you want me to give

  him some of this sweet bootie?

 

T

  (outraged)

     No whore!  I want you to turn the preacher boy

     the hell out! Now suck on my man while I tell you

     what I want you to do.

 

A CLOSE UP reveals Delana smiling. T takes a sip of malt liquor and smiles wickedly before telling Delana of his evil plan.

  

 DISSOLVE:  A FEW DAYS LATER:

 MUSIC- BY THE FRESH PRINCE- “SUMMERTIME”

                                               

 EXT. PLAYGROUND –HOT SUMMER DAY-EARLY AFTERNOON

We CRANE SHOT as fifteen-year-old Keith is playing full-court basketball with a group of kids in the seventeen to nineteen year old range. Even though the boys are older than he is, Keith is clearly the best player on the court.  A VOICE OVER reveals T’s vile plan.

 

T (VO)

Let’s see how holy this nigga’ really is...

 

 Delana is watching with a group of her friends, the girls are all very attractive; the boys are trying to impress them. Keith is too focused on playing ball to notice the girls. After playing basketball Keith sits with his friends, they drink water and sports drinks; they joke around and tease Keith about his young age and being a preacher. He laughs; these guys are his buddies.  In SLOW MOTION we observe Delana walking seductively and alone up to the group of boys, she is wearing very revealing “Daisy Duke” cut-off jean shorts and a low cut halter-top. The boys stop talking; she is the type of girl that is sexy enough to stop traffic.

          

DELANA

(seductive)

       Good game Reverend Keith.

 

KEITH

(innocence)

                  Thanks sister Delana, so where is that big ole

baby boy of yours?

 

DELANA

He’s with my grandma, my mom is at work and

my grandma was nice enough to take him for the

day so I could get me a break! Wasn’t that sweet

of her Reverend?

 KEITH

Oh yes! Mother Jackson is one of the sweetest

ladies at Redemption; I am sure going to miss

her fried chicken.

 

Keith is still sitting down with his friends who are silent in disbelief that this fine freak is trying to give the little preacher boy some bootie and he doesn’t even know it! 

                         

DELANA

(pouting lips.)

I am sure gonna to miss you Reverend Keith.  I wish

your daddy didn’t take that Pastors job at that other

church. (beat) Reverend Keith, will you walk home with me?

 

 We MID SHOT as the older boys are encouraging Keith

 

BOY 1

              You go little Rev., get your freak on!

 

BOY 2

      Satan sure is busy today.

 

Keith ignores them, after all Delana is a member of Redemption EvangelisticChurch and a child of God. Keith decides to walk with Delana and talk with her about The Love and Salvation of Jesus Christ.

 

KEITH 

Sister Delana did you know that one of The Lord Jesus’

most beloved followers while He walked the Earth was a

prostitute, her name was Mary Magdalene, she was possessed

by seven demons.(beat)People just loved to judge

            and condemn her.(beat) They even wanted to stone

her to death, but you know what sister Delana? Jesus loved

her and saved her soul. He loves you and He will save

your soul too, if you want Him to? Do you want to be

saved sister Delana, do you want Jesus to set you free?

 

They arrive in front of Delana’s apartment building.

 

DELANA

  (wicked smile)

   Oh yes Reverend Keith, (beat) I want to be free.

 

DISSOLVE: MUSIC-PETER BROWN-“DO YOU WANNA GET FUNKY WITH ME?”

THE FALL OF KEITH:

INT. DELANA’S MOTHER’S APARTMENT

 

DISSOLVE into fifteen-year-old Keith, and seventeen-year-old Delana having sex. Delana is on top of Keith.  At this point she is clearly the sexual aggressor.

 

DELANA

(screaming lustfully)

YOU LOVE MY SWEET BOOTIE, DON’T YOU REVEREND

KEITH!?  MAKE ME SCREAM BABY!!  (beat) YOU BELONG

TO ME NOW PREACHER BOY!

 

A CLOSE UP shows Keith looking up at Delana with a look of terror and utter disbelief. A tear forms in the corner of his right eye and then releases itself.  Delana sees the teardrop and begins to slow her gyrations; she then proceeds to lick the tear from Keith’s face. This act of compassion affects Keith, he now becomes extremely aroused and turns Delana on her back.

KEITH

    (Looking Delana directly into her eyes)

 IS THIS HOW YOU WANT IT!?! IS THIS WHAT YOU

 WANT!?! IS THIS WHY YOU STARE AT ME ALL THE

 TIME! YOU HAPPY NOW!?!

 

                                 DELANA

 (out of control)

                         YES! YES! YES!  DO ME!!!!!

 

MUSIC FADES OUT:

FADE IN:  AFTER SEX: SITTING UP IN DELANA’S BED- DRENCHED WITH SWEAT

 

  DELANA (CONT’D)

Oh my goodess baby you’re incredible, nobody ever did it to

me like that before. (beat) Here baby, mama’s got something

good for you.

 

Delana takes a long drink from a forty-ounce bottle of iced cold COLT-45 malt liquor that has been defrosting on a night-stand. She passes the bottle to Keith, who takes a long drink as well, in a CLOSE-UP SHOT IN SLOW MOTION.

 

KEITH

Man, that’s good beer. My dad always said beer taste

nasty, but it sure taste good to me.

 

DELANA

I am glad you like it mama’s sweet baby, I got something

else you’re gonna like too.

 

Delana lights up a huge joint, inhales deeply, then gives Keith a shotgun kiss filled with marijuana smoke. Keith inhales the smoke, then coughs heavily, he then begins to laugh hysterically.  Delana joins in Keith’s laughter as she passes him the joint to smoke by himself. Keith inhales deeply then releases a huge cloud of weed smoke.

 

DISSOLVE:                                        

 

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