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Tears of Rain

Updated on December 14, 2011
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

I've been waiting for you

To come and save me

From my dreary day

I's funny how you wash things away

When I need you the most

Pitter Patter

On my window

I hear you coming down

Cleaning away all my fears

I always know when you come around

Wiping out all the torment

And the haziness where I was stuck

You brought back my dreams

And fantasies with luck

You sing to my soul

Everytime you show yourself

And leave me feeling clear

You a gentle whisper

Will always be very dear


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Hi KDee thanks for the compliments! Go ahead and use the pic I don't mind. :)

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      KDee411 6 years ago from Bay Area, California

      I really love your poem and the picture is fantastic. Can I use it? I'll let you use my upside down rainbow, I think you'll like it. It's on my first hub today, hope you come on over. Ithis is my new name.

      You so lucky your such a good writer. I never learned but I'm learning.


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Jspot thank you for your comment, yes I am in a way. I'm glad you liked my poem.

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      lost love 6 years ago from Flames of water and love

      If I get a tear in my eyes it is because of the depth of beauty portrayed in your words. I see you are much of an Empath in your way to listen and the desire to help. Beautiful that is.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      April thank you so much. :)

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      April Reynolds 6 years ago from Arizona

      Wonderful poem Caroline, and a great picture too. :)

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Shimmering Dawn thank you for your heartfelt comment! I am glad you liked it. :)

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      Beautiful Caroline.. there is nothing like the smell and sound of rain to the soul... But for me it is time of purging of any sadness within me. It always leaves me feeling great :) Thanks for sharing :) Shalom!

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Dinkan thank you for reading and leaving your wonderful comment. :)

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      dinkan53 6 years ago from India

      Beautiful writing. These are the sweetest things I ever heard about the rain. I love the smell around when rain just starts and rainy season is the time I feel most active. rated up and beautiful.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thanks Debra for stopping by and reading!

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      Debra Verville 6 years ago from USA

      Nice! Voted up. And I love the rain.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Thank you Always.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 6 years ago from Southern Illinois


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Crimmy - thanks!

      VQisya - thank you for your support.

      Daydreamer - thank you. It's always good to see you.

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      V Qisya 6 years ago

      "You sing to my soul"...Wow!

      Beautifully written, Caroline. I loved it! Take care. Up and away ;)

      Best Wishes, V

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      -Crimmy- 6 years ago

      Nicely done! Voted up.


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