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~ Adam Loves Eve ~

Updated on April 30, 2013

~ Adam Loves Eve ~


V1/ Her arched,silhouette,

Announces twilight is here;

Curvaceous shadows,

Warn excitement be near.


V2/ Should she succumb

To the rapturous,mysteries ahead;

Or surrender,

To the ethereal,goodnight,instead?


V3/ Golden swishes,

As she turns her head;

Enchanting eyes,

That could leave you dead.

Tresses fall,

Just like tumbling Niagara;

Sunburst braids,

That will instantly grab ya.


V4/ Enthralled,

By her debonnaire persuasion;

You'll always rise,

To celebratory occasion.

No need for superstitious,

Four-leaved clover,

Her propitious presence,

Leaves you hungry all over.


V5/ Those fragrant sighs,

Lend romantic flair,

She's nonchalant;

Without a care.


V6/ First,reach on through,

To a downtrodden heart,

And rip all her hurt,and pain,apart.

Envelop the gaps,

With your love,sweet love,

Then leave her good memories,

Like her hand fits her glove.


V7/ Now,no more pretence,

For an affectatious dreamer;

Craving assidious attention,

For her film-star demeanour.

Exquisite style,

Oozed from her sensuous thoughts;

Offering mannerisms,and grace,

That just cannot be bought.


V8/ Lapsed time,

Unfolds,

Revealing players

Of delight;

The echeloned hours,

Masking pleasures

In the night.


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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      Beautiful poem and illustration.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      @suzettenaples

      Yours is high praise,indeed,which I thank God for.I shall take a look at your work,when I can.Thank You.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Romeos Quills,

      This is beautiful, romantic, whimsical, and sensual. I love it!

      Up and Awesome!

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      @Can'tuhearmescream

      You are so generous with your appreciation,and I highly value your perspective on any of my offerings.So lovely.

      Thank You,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Romeos Quill,

      I think you will be well accepted here, you have quite a talent. I just can't wait for others to discover you! It's only a matter of time!

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat;

      You're priceless!

      R.Q.

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      Ana Maria Orantes 4 years ago from Miami Florida

      Good job quill. I like the picture and the words of your poem.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      erorantes

      Welcome!

      Thanks very much.I look forward to maybe reading some of your work in the near future.

      R.Q.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A great poem and I now look forward to many more by you.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Again,thank you.There a few to choose from,so far,to take you upon a flight of the imagination,should you so wish,and I certainly hope to proffer a few more,according to how the heart decides to animate the quill.

      Thanks for today's blessing;

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Prouvaire 4 years ago from Illinois

      The picture and poem are lovely, but I can't help but feel you stretched a little for some of the rhymes. (This could be my own bias, though; I personally write unrhymed verse.) Otherwise, the words sounded delightful in my mind.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Prouvaire

      Welcome,and pleased to make your acquaintance.

      I'm pleased that you liked it.On this one,I sacrificed cadence for narrative;something which I don't normally do,and shall review. :)

      I'll put my words on a treadmill,and strict diet immediately :) Thank you for the constructive criticism,which is always welcome,

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Hey RQ,

      Greetings! The cadence is very strong. I read it once and then read it out loud. I can also see why Adam would have had a difficult time denying Eve anything. Smiles.

      Best Always,

      Kim

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Kim!

      The Eve in this verse is quite intoxicating, and you are completely right. Poor Adam is going to be a busy boy :)

      Thanks so much for alighting on this page, and leaving such engaging, and heart-warming words.Thank you.

      Yours sincerely,

      R.Q.

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