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~~~ After Eight ~~~

Updated on May 5, 2013

~ After Eight ~



Magnetic attraction,

From a love reaction,

Lends warmth to your acquiescent gaze;

Crackling like static;

Ever-ready to spark the expectant silence

With a hint of dramatic.


A descendent hush gives way to an inferno

Of suppressed longings,

Which dare not breathe their name,

Until you have been exalted

To the lofty heights of a mysterious,

Aloof,mythical deity.


We spontaneously combust from our fiery ardour,

And the room is set ablaze with Eastern promise.

Your knowing look makes one lose control;

That sensuous,serpentine body shimmies,

Like an uncoiled whip;

Mesmerizing hips,that offer no parole.


Prescription of wild abandon

Permeates the resplendent night;

A shaft of lunar silver,

The only witness to betray our hidden desires,

Which are best left unsaid.


Unceasing surges,

Releasing urges,

In time,unmeasured,

Nocturnally pleasured;

Heavenly bliss,

'Till the twilight of morn;

You and I,

Will remember this dawn.



THE END


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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      PHILLYDREAMER

      It was a secondary,rhyming verse,with a primary poetic narrative.I create my own styles, sometimes, when feeling inventive, which might explain why you had to read it a few times, if you was approaching the piece from the former perspective.

      Cheers,

      R.Q.

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Sounds like one Hell of a night. My one critique on this one, was your rhyme scheme was all over the place. This through the rhythm off for me and I had to read it about 4 times to actually absorb the content.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      You couldn't handle it any more appropriately. Let us not forget, too much censoring might ruin the magic; you have the perfect combination.

      Trust me, from some of the things I've read here... you're far from in danger. I must admit, some of my cheesy sailor-type hubs... I hesitate to publish, but when the mood strikes me it strikes me. :-)

      With much love,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Thanks,babe.

      It's quite difficult writing this type of narrative without being disrespectful,or delving into the seedy underbelly of pornography,which I definitely do not want to do;I was a bit dubious about publishing,but figured that the HP audience would be the best judge of that.

      You are very kind with your comments,Cat.

      Yours,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      This one's a bit steamy! "Nocturnally pleasured", I think you coined a new phrase! This pulls you right in... kind of sad to reach the end and realize 'tis only a dream! Beautiful!

      Cat