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~~~ Aimee Valentine ~~~

Updated on January 27, 2014

~ Aimee Valentine ~


A mysterious, star-crossed lover perspired fragrances of mellow apricot meeting citrus notes of sweet blood orange, whose merciless secretions made one beg to live and die in that same instant; this mellifluous, scented noise traversed drowned sighs of pleasing report which glided with express purpose, as they whispered rumour unto the shell-like of mettlesome Eros for permission to copyright surrender of this palpitating expectation.

Her pretty head, marinaded by years of comely aspect, exploded with estuaries of Irish fire, meandering slinky sinuations of glace’ed, walnut molten across her foxy face, like saffron tails of Krakatoa which no drooling gushes couldst douse, athwart curtained, framed dreams of stained-glass windows, confronting hazy, sapphired salutes, like siroccos greeting imitations of peppermint reflection from visual echoes of a frosted lake, exuding emanations from the origins of her dual altars of his answered prayer.

Sex appeal oozed like mayonnaise, drizzled over fresh, crisp lettuce, whilst her evening gown clenched tighter than a derelict to a dollar bill. Oyster pearls glistened as they draped her de’colletage of malted milk, whilst her legs were as barber's scissors, ready to trim a midnight lamp, as she moved like a Swiss clock. Swanking a derrie're, like two unclaimed beach balls crammed into a cubbyhole at the lost and found, she had a licence to thrill and wasn’t afraid to use it. Rolling hips, curved as a dreadnought country guitar, playing everything but B Flat; she was a heart-attack in black as she held the mic like a hot dog to a broken January resolution, ready to croon some long-forgotten jazz. The furore of her smoulder could open a wallet for the finest Jeroboam of Dom Perignon at two-hundred yards; pouting cupcake lips of pink fairy dust, dipped in Burgundy wine, dripped majestic harmonies, as desire raged tempestuous thunders 'cross the subdued ambiance of a smoke-filled speakeasy….



FIN

* Music By Kenny Loggins *

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      The different citrus smells and how the narrator reacts to them in the first stanza is well done. The whole poem is well done, I like how you compared her sex appeal to mayonaisse over fresh lettuce. Well done. Jamie

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Jamie,

      It seemed to be getting a little dead around these parts, so thought I'd inject a little pizazz and shake things up a bit before some folk die of terminal boredom lol! ( jk ).

      See you have a new Hub up!

      All the Best,

      R.Q.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      I love your descriptive and very poetic image you conjure up with words, Romeo -- amazing, sensuous and so real she comes alive with your pen. A "heart attack in black" is awesome! Makes me wish I could affect my man like she does. I love this work of yours.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      As always, your work makes me instantly, smell things, feel things, taste things, see and hear....So vivid it is in it's imagery! And for personal reasons...love the images of the girls in glasses. Blessings your way. Jennifer

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Phyllis,

      I hope you had an exciting weekend, and the new week is displaying something noteworthy to you and your kin. Oh boy! did I have fun with this one lol! Hey don't doubt yourself Phyllis - I'm sure that ALL women have the ability to do that to their husband or fiance'e when the moment seizes them.

      Thanks a million for flying by for a read, and for pouring your wonderful reportage on this li'l comment section. Keep those aspirin handy :)

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Jennifer ( if I may ),

      That sure is very generous of you to relay, so thank you.

      I think smexy and spexy is quite attractive; perhaps it's because it makes her look more intelligent, but vulnerable? Don't know yet - never really thought about it that much.

      Thanks for the blessings and hope you have a pleasant evening.

      Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      And you as well!

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Romeo -- yes, I bet you had fun with that one, it was delightful to read. Thank you for the best wishes and the encouragement. Have a great week and all the best to you.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Thank goodness you are around HP Town, as it does get a bit boring for sure, but we can count on you to spice things up! My friend and I were just talking about that very thing this day, and I thought, well Romeos keeps things pretty non-boring no doubt one bit : )

      Enjoyed the sizzle!

      Up and more and sharing.

      Hope you have a lovely week,

      Faith Reaper

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      :) And it's never boring when royalty such as yourself grace us with your unique presence dear Faith Reaper.

      There are some really great people on here with such writing talent, but I suppose being a Monday, it can get a bit Yawnsville from time to time.

      Thank you so much, for sauntering by in style, and hope that you and hubby can find a name for li'l Fido, or you may have to call him Clint - the dog with no name :)

      Enjoy a smashing evening and a splendid week ahead;

      With Warmest Regards,

      R.Q.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Some serious sensuality in this one R.Q. Up+

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      as always R Q a sensuous and beautiful creation. Voting up and sharing.

      Eddy.

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      Suzette Walker 3 years ago from Taos, NM

      Wow! Romantic and sensuous to be sure! You paint quite a picture with your words. I love the glasses on these women and that you see loveliness, glasses and all. What a turn on for you! LOL! Great poem and Valentine tribute!

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

      Romeos, is this "heart-attack in black" the same Aimee with the sparkling eyes? She's certainly not your average woman. She inspires such grand descriptions. Great!

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      Jane Arden 3 years ago

      Phew. that was amazing. There was so much in it and I think I 'got it.' I love your way with words. She is stunning as well. I quite often read your work twice, I have had to do it with this one as well. Awesome!!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      I know I left a comment on he previously but it hasn't appeared so here goes again. I'll make it short and sweet, "Damn sexy!"

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Much obliged Eddy. I hope all's well with you and your family in scenic Wales.

      Take Care,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Lol! Glasses or not suzette, real beauty cannot hide :) Thanks a million for coming over and pouring your splendour on this little piece.

      Good wishes your way;

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      It is indeed MsDora, and to disagree with your superb remarks would be as sensible as wrestling with thin air.

      Glad you enjoyed the read, and you must be looking forward to your trip soon, no doubt.

      Safe journey and best wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      You're a pretty nifty writer yourself Lesley; I hoped you enjoyed it second time round too - that's really kind of you, and also to alight with such encouraging and generous commentary is a bonus to cherish for sure. Thank you.

      I hope you have yourself a calm and enlightening day ahead today;

      With Kindest Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Jodah,

      Very occasionally, the comments take time to appear as I've just noticed that the choices for revealing your first one was different to every one else's on this piece; why that is, is a mystery but thank you for taking the time and effort to do such, which I appreciate, so thank you indeed.

      Have a grand day, and ( hopefully ) a creative week ahead.

      All the Best,

      R.Q.

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      I love the description of "pouting cupcake lips of pink fairy dust, dipped in Burgundy wine." Very sensuous! This must have been fun to write!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Bk42author;

      I tried to capture that first evening when a man first meets his lady.

      The hapless suitor perched in the audience enraptured amidst his excited soliloquy is none other than......Mr. Valentine. :)

      Thanks a million for flying over and for leaving such generous remarks.

      Warm Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Judy Specht 3 years ago from California

      Your use of adjectives and description is like watching a gymnast perform.

      You had me completely until the mayonnaise. Then the whole thing fell apart. I think of mayonnaise as globby fat.

      This is still fabulous.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      @tirelesstraveler

      “You can please some of the people all of the time, you can please all of the people some of the time, but you can’t please all of the people all of the time." - John Lydgate ( also attributed to your President Abe Lincoln ).

      Lol! Well; not everyone likes mayo - beautiful in a salad.

      Thanks for your reportage.

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      P.S. There are over one-hundred and sixty-nine pieces to choose from; perhaps there would be something more to your liking amongst them.

      Good day madam;

      R.Q.

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