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~~~ Babe ~~~

Updated on May 12, 2013

~ Babe ~



V1/ Hearts' fires' rage,

Never making a sound;

Restrained by the few,

Until answers are found.


V2/ Imperfect words,

Embody perfect reflection;

Unwound, expert thoughts,

By tumultuous inflexion.


V3/ A darkened repaste,

For the sceptre of youth,

Whilst waywardly scrambling,

For treats of untruth.


V4/ Come hither,be mine;

Don't wither on the vine.

You were sacrosanct bound,

Now in love,you are crowned.


V5/ Bringing flesh to your bones,

I'm your strength and your sinew;

I'll gift you with words

That men long to look into.


V6/ If you're ever let down,

Babe,I'm always around,

To dab sad,crystal tears,

'Fore they fall to the ground.


V7/ Spread your wings,as you sigh,

'Cos I'll take you so high.

"I'm flying!",you'll murmur,

As we leave 'terra firma';

Our future is nigh,

No word of a lie.


V8/ Let's vanquish your fears,

So they cannot adhere,

To my sweet honey-dew,

Whilst this loving is true.

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    • Cantuhearmescream profile image

      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Romeo... okay, between you and I, I'm taking this one too! :-) My goodness, how beautiful... I suppose it means so much more when I chose to make it personal, but even a stranger cannot deny the beauty that is obvious! How passionate and comforting; I'm glad I have not yet put my socks on this morning because this one would've surely knocked them to the moon! I have something special tied into every verse... this one hits deep Romeo, you're beautifully talented!

      Your Biggest Admirer,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      You're quick on the draw,today!Speedy Gonzalez has got nothing on you.lol!I hope you and you're family are doing well.I'm glad you liked it;after all,it's yourself,and people like you that make it all worthwhile,and gives me a warm glow,knowing that a little more joy has been added to an often,morose world.

      Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Hahahaha, should I have waited a moment? I couldn't help it... just about the very first thing I did this morning before taking my first breath was checking on my Romeo :-)

      It is beautiful, honestly... it will melt the hearts of thousands, for a hundred years to come!

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      You 'ol flatterer,you!lol!As long as it doesn't wind up in the garbage,and ends up finding those it is supposed to,I'll settle for that.

      Thanks,Angel.

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Garbage? Well, gee is my negative Nelly attitude rubbing off on you :-)

      Garbage... pfft! Your words are unmatchable, honestly... to find anything remotely close I would have to resort to the Classics section at the Library, but yours, yours is even better than that, modern and passionate... ahhh ;-)

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Come here,you.... :)

      Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      I'm tryin', I'm tryin' :-)

      It pains me so... but I must be off to pay my mother her dues on this Mother's Day. I will miss you terribly, this is true... I will have thoughts of you while I am away and hope nothing more than to see your beautiful face when I return. In the meantime, my dear... have a most pleasant afternoon... know that you are adored!

      Yours,

      Cat

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Romeo's Quill has written the words with passion and intensity that lights up the heart! Beautifully inscribed and a joy to read. Thanks for sharing your words with us..... :)

      Take care

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Beautiful and awesome. You are an artist! Enough said.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      I hope you spent a pleasant 'Mother's Day' afternoon with your family,tweety-pie.The chasm of your absence was keenly felt.

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      LaThing

      To shine a torch on the heart is a pleasure to write about,and I'm happy that you enjoyed reading said piece.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      writinglover

      Thanks a lot.I see you're expanding your horizons by diversifying your subject matter,and tackling different forms of writing;all the best with that.

      Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Heeeeeee's ba-a-a-ck! Hey sweetness! It was pleasant... a little disappointing, I went and picked me mum up some gifts and when I stopped to deliver them and visit, she was on her way out.. short, but sweet visit.

      Aw, I'm glad I was missed, as you were as well! I need a dose of some Romeo.. 'course I'm behind on a chapter or two, so there is already material waiting for me :-)

      Sincerely,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      You always swim through the waters of my heart,and I was waiting for you to turn the next page of my mind.:)

      Sorry that it was a little disappointing for you,but that's life....sometimes seems 'unfair',but can also be 'unfair' in your favour,as well.

      Well,I hope you enjoy chillin' looking through some of the writing,and that you have a lovely evening,petal.

      Your Truly,R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Aw, your words melt my heart!

      Disappointing? What on earth would I have to be disappointed about... I am far from disappointed, though I will be if I don't find my way over to these beauties I've just received word you've created!

      Always thinking of you... even when I'm away from your pages :-)

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      You're just one big bundle of gorgeousness,wrapped in a layer of seduction,dipped in sweetness,and served with a massive dollop of love.

      Yours,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Awwww :-)

      Well, you ready for a serving yet or what? ;-)

      Yours,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      I'm ready,but brace yourself.....I ain't finishing until I've eaten the lot ;)

      Yours

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Forgive me for leaving you hanging... I should learn to turn my phone off :-(

      Hmmmm, perhaps my melted heart and lightheadedness that you've caused, has rendered me simple... I'm trying to analyze your little statement, but each time I come to a conclusion I wonder if I'm seeing where you're going with this? I'll have to let that one soak in.

      Your confused Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      No worries,about the 'hanging' thing;I know how it is,trying to see to various people at once,and there just isn't enough of you to go round.I wouldn't read too much into it that last little statement...just a playful retort to your previous comment,that's all,nothing serious.Sorry if it confused you;I'll be more careful,and exercise more clarity in the future.

      Sincerely Yours,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Well, don't for a minute think that you are just another name on a list of things or people to get to, I truly look forward to reading your beautiful work and conversing with you... it is absolutely the highlight of my day! :-)

      Oh, stop, you don't have to be careful... things don't usually go over my head :-) I just find myself dissecting and anyalyzing your every word, because I am trying to really get to know you and understand you. Sometimes, I think too much.

      So anyway... just let me know what I have to do so that you may "eat the lot" ;-)

      'Til then my dear,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Just keep going as you are,and be yourself.You're doing alright in my book. (;0)

      Yours,as ever,

      R,Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Well baby, my aim is better than "alright"... I must impress Romeo enough to jump on a plane, no? :-)

      You're awesome... really!

      Yours,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      It's going to take some time,as I need to renew my passport,and get time off,and I can't expect to keep a lady waiting...that is why I've felt a little apprehensive recently,because the longer I wait,the more chance I have of losing you....and that would ruin everything.I don't really want to say too much more on a public forum(It already seems like I've been hogging too much air space as it is).

      Thanks Cat,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Ohhh, I'm just trying to play Romeo... I'm absolutely content in just convincing myself that you might somehow actually be a little interested. I absolutely am finding myself thinking the world of you and I'm blown away because I didn't even know you existed a couple of weeks ago. There's just something about you that I feel so connected to. Please, don't let me stress you out... I'm just trying to be playful. You aren't losing anything, trust me... you're only gaining!

      You sleep... know I'm thinking of you and all is great, okay chick pea?

      Much Love,

      Cat

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Words so full of beauty showing off your talent at its best.

      Voted up and sharing.

      Eddy.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Thank you.You're not stressing me out,honestly.You have a lovely afternoon,sweetheart.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you,Eddy.You're very encouraging,and much obliged for the share.

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Hey there handsome boy! I'm in and out between making dinner, but I wanted to swing in and say hello. :-) Hope all is well!

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Hey there,starlight!Thanks for dropping by.I hope you received your morning message this time, in your fan mail.I'll leave you to your din-dins :P (I'll have an extra spud,please ;).Catcha on the flip side.

      Yours,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Now that's more like it... I was wondering if you were a bit distant... less concerned about me, more concerned you weren't having the best of days. Oh, I will check posthaste... and if it's not there this time... just "send Cantuhearmescream an email", it's in the same section.

      An extra spud for my stud... coming up!

      Yours Truly

      Cat

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Nice romantic sentiment. Good flow and rhyme.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      PHILLYDREAMER

      Thanks,man.

      Peace,and Best Wishes,

      Romeo's Quill

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