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~~~ Breathless... ~~~

Updated on October 18, 2013

~ Breathless ..... ~



V1/ A kiss wrapped wish I send to thee,

To fire your heart, and set you free;

I task dame, for her flashing smile,

Yea, scarlet vogue, ne’er out of style.


V2/ So fine, you take my breath away,

Please sit and talk with me today;

I’ll riddle you tales of love and woe,

Impassioned highs of daunting flow;

Of hands, that let their lover’s go,

And dreams, which made fond mistrals blow.


V3/ Holding you across the table,

“ Are you for real or just a fable? “

Your heart is shy, though eyes content,

My Lois Lane, is heaven sent.


V4/ The world, deceased, just you and I,

Let’s build our chateau above your sky;

You’ll reign as queen of all I am,

In Kingdom dreams of future plans.


V5/ Beseeching thee with wondrous face,

Sweet mystery locked, inside your grace;

Thine days, were writ, inside His lore,

Begat in parlanced nevermore.


V6/ I’ll hold thee close, my burnished star,

To whisper who you really are;

Moonlight’s ecstatic rhapsody,

May melt sweet loving over thee.


V7/ Lo, pour yourself into my arms,

Let rippled flesh release thy charms;

To yield this beauty, stored for you,

‘Mid gentle streams, of ‘ I love you .’



THE END

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Cindinspired,

      Well, glad that you enjoyed this one and certainly wish you a marvellous evening too in the Lone Star State.

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Cindi 4 years ago from Texas

      Oh my! This was breathtaking! I love the photos!! Your heart is beautiful! Have an awesome day! :)

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you kindly Ann for such uplifting and wonderful remarks; I certainly wish you a cracking lease and rest of the week in the South-West also, but hope that the predicted storms have not materialized your way.

      Take Care,

      R.Q.

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      Ann Carr 4 years ago from SW England

      How beautiful! Brings a romantic sigh to my heart. Wonderful illustrations too. Another gem from your quill. Have a great weekend! Ann

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Dear Faith,

      Thank you for your wonderful commentary ( re-writing this comment ).

      I sure hope that you enjoyed a wonderful weekend with your heaven-sent tiddler, and sincerely appreciate your uplifting and supportive remarks, and glad that you enjoyed the pictures and verse.

      Enjoy a lovely evening, and sending best wishes for the week ahead.

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      All I can say Wayne is that the Good Lord created a masterpiece, and all I can do is to lift her in admiration, extolling her magnificence, and by extension, bring worthy praise and glory to her Creator.

      Thanks for your generosity,

      All the Best,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hello Theater girl,

      Happy to lend a temporary lift to those heady days of romance to which you speak, and it's always good when you alight with such uplifting and amazing comments.

      Wishing you a lovely week ahead,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Wetnosedogs!

      Gushing, you say? Then I'll soak it up like a human sponge to slowly sail it across the back of her whom is worthy to bathe in such myriad beauty of their utterance.

      I trust you and the weekend cuddles are doing just fine, and thank you for your kind remarks.

      I see you have another review up!

      Sincere Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hello N/C Princess Kim of the Carolinas :)

      It is nice isn't it when a woman can feel like a woman and a man never has to apologize for being a man.

      Thank you for such esteemed comments, and I'm never one to turn down O2 from such a talented writer of Novella.

      With Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi CraftytotheCore,

      I didn't leave a comment on your recent poem ' Our Days Are Numbered ', as everyone else had already said it - beautiful, and such a personal write; thank you for sharing such.

      Thank you for such magnanimity on this piece, and glad that it did appeal.

      Have a lovely evening, and best wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Good Evening Laurie,

      The pics are out there in the virtual world, many of them free, or requiring a befiiting acknowledgement with their use - quote away!

      Certainly appreciate your generous remarks, and truly, this is how I feel it should always be between man and woman for the most part, without pettiness and annoying trivialities marring a beautiful thing.

      Glad you enjoyed this li'l story, and that life is going well for you. Thank you for your blessings, and happily return to you in manifold offerings of goodwill.

      With Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Sparklea!

      I hope you and your family are well, and have managed to find a solution to your animal's health issues.

      Always happy to share with amazing people like yourself, which add more zest to life and cancels out the jealous and uncharitable.

      I'm well, thank you for inquiring, and know you are also from your comments here, and thank you for your blessings which you so thoroughly deserve to have returned in overflowing measure. Indeed, there are some marvellous folk at HP, who turn the brightness up a notch on some dreary days.

      Take Care, and thanks again.

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Jo ( tobusiness ),

      Thank you for flying by, and if it ' blew you away ', as you so eloquently say, then I certainly hope that it gusted you in a direction which was agreeable with you.

      I love you nurses - you do a sterling job and don't always receive the recognition you so thoroughly deserve.

      With Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Much obliged, Mhatter99, and thank you for sharing.

      All the Best,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Anna,

      It's welcoming to hear your commentary, and glad you liked it. Time waits for no man, and life must move forward, sealing the ghosts of yesterday in a limbo of their own making.

      Wishing you a pleasant week ahead, and thank you.

      Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Romeo, you really are a romantic, aren't you? Gorgeous!

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      So very lovely, and whenever I read you...I am transported to another time filled with lords and their ladies fair!

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Goodness, Romeos Quill,

      You got all the women gushing over you!

      Powerful love poem.

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Still gasping for air...

      Most lovely Dear Romeo

      breathing in/breathing out

      thinking how nice it is

      when we just let go

      Sending O2 to My dear friend and fellow poet, RQ,

      Your Non-Conforming Carolina Princess ; )

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      CraftytotheCore 4 years ago

      Your words are truly beautiful. What a poetic arrangement with the breath-taking photos.

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      Rayne123 4 years ago

      Very enchanting and romantic poem.

      I will also use the word captivated. You out do yourself every time.

      Where did you get that first picture it is out of this world. I love it.

      I could write a quote on a picture like that.

      Enchanting and sexy/classy and one could envision the story in their thoughts.

      Blessings

      Laurie

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      Sparklea 4 years ago from Upstate New York

      Voted up and beautiful...It is almost impossible to describe your pictures they are beyond exquisite. Your gift of putting words together the way you do sets you so much apart from others. Unique is not a strong enough word. Cherish your gift - you will go far in the writing world.

      So happy for your creativity and your willingness to share it with others.

      I hope you are happy, free, and as blessed as you certainly bless others through your writing. Sparklea God loves you and so do I :) I thank God for the wonderful folks I have met on Hub Pages

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      The first image simply blow me away, then I read the poem, and I'm captivated, very beautiful, definitely classy. :)

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Very romantic. thank you

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      Anna Haven 4 years ago from Scotland

      Glad you are able to move beyond the princess and the pain. Beautifully written. I liked your 'lois lane,' it brought a familiar, concrete reality to a love story still in planning. Nicely done.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Breathless indeed, dear Romeos! Wow, you have certainly written a love poem for all of time here ... seems you are dreaming of planting a seed in the secret garden of that one's soul, that you will water everyday and give it love to grow (I may have read that last part of my comment somewhere once). That third image you have there, actually looks like you. You are one truly romantic, debonair and very gifted man, and I am so thrilled ... for you seem to not have given up on love or maybe you are just dreaming of one from long ago.

      Perfect imagery. Up and more and sharing, of course!

      Have a splendid weekend.

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      That's good to hear WL - pretty much the same here today, as well. Don't forget to treat yourself this weekend if no one else is; at least working in the kitchens will keep you warm tomorrow :)

      R.Q.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Right now, it's cold and wet (as October should be). At least I'm not boiling hot (not yet as I have to work in the kitchen tomorrow morning). But other than that, I'm well. Thanks!

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Flash!

      Yeah, I'm doing just fine, thank you for asking - I trust life is treating you well in Minnesota, and the elements aren't giving you guys too much trouble over there.

      Thanks for your marvellous commentary, and votes, and happy that the verse appealed.

      Take care,

      R.Q.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      This was beautiful, R.Q! Stunning! Voted it up!

      Hope you are doing well!