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I Close My Eyes..

Updated on April 25, 2012


Imagination is reality



My eyes are closed.... you are next to me

I feel you there, Feryal..... though I can not see

My Tender Flower...... I smell your scent

it is so sweet.... only for me meant

Your Loveliness Feryal .... I can not touch

for to stop this fantasy.... would be to much

Yes, My Love.... it is forever yours

until the Ocean... overflows the shores

until the skies are cold and dark

the love I feel... it needs no spark

to light the fire... of Love deep inside.

A Love so strong.... it cannot hide

A Love that can't run....

Our Love can only fly

We are together, Feryal....

as we will touch the sky



Meant to be.....



It was meant to be

this Love between.. you and me

Love ... it can not be denied

when we are lifted into the skies

by our words so soft and real

like the colors blue and teal

we are one.... never to part

for my love... Feryal

you have my heart..






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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Beautiful poetry... so soft, tender, appealing...

      Lovely depiction of heartfelt love :)

      Amazing!

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      I don't know where you get so many ideas..Also the lovely pictures. Do you always rhyme? very creative. I really enjoy reading your hubs and comments of yours and your fans. Very interesting :)

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      kathryn1000 5 years ago from London

      Simply delightful

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Lovely romantic poem Michael. What a cute teddy bear!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @rahul, thank you for commenting and glad you like my poetry. You are a strong supporter of the poets here on the pages. I want to tell you we all appreciate your strong support. Thanks.

      @ Sparrow, I find inspiration from the smallest thing to as a beautiful Tender Flower to a line on a page. I love to rhyme for that is my style. It is not for every one but I love it . it is annoying to some , but I will never tire of it. i like to even rhyme in replys when i am feeling very happy and playful. thank you for reading, glad you like my poetry.

      @ Kathryn, i am so happy to see you on my hub.!!! thank you for leaving a comment . i loved your last poem . It was very sweet and heartfelt. Please come again.

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      kathryn1000 5 years ago from London

      I hope to come more.Thanks.

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Michael , your " me " in this poem is so lucky having you..she must be so happy having you ! Such a very very beautiful poem...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Caroline, Hello gorgeous, your comments are valued for you are a great poet yourself. thanks for the support .

      @ angel, hi again .you are an inspiration to all with your haiku's of love. Glad you like the poem.

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      anndavis25 5 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      You are an artist with inspiration and know how to express with a flow of feelings. I bet with your romanticism, you could also express with a paint brush.

      Up and awesome...Ann

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Michael, your poetry is simply a wonderful expression of the most natural feeling there is, that being love between two people who understand the true meaning of it, and appreciate it as a gift that must be treasured and taken care of. Your love is deep for it portraits its wholeness with a spiritual connection.

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      "A Love that can't run...Our Love can only fly..."

      There are so many meanings in those few words! A beautiful poem with two separate yet completely harmonious pieces, Michael. Great expression here! A deep portrayal of pure love from the heart!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ahh.. two beautiful women that respond to my hub at the same time. The lord has truly blessed me.

      @ Ann, thank you for the kind words, It brings a smile to my face to hear you praise my write.

      @ Katrine, your support is always looked forward to, your poetry is an inspiration to me and all the hubbers who write. your poetry is very exquisite. thank you for your comments.

      Michael

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Voronwe, thank you for your kind and thoughtful words. Your comments are greatly appreciated. thank you for visiting my hub. very happy you like the poem.

      Michael

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Michael, Your poetry flows so

      soothly. Loved it..

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ruby, thank you ruby. glad you like my poem.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      As long as two people are in sync, they will touch the sky! Great poem with lovely photo enhancements. Enjoyed the read, as always.

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      laurathegentleman 5 years ago from Chapel Hill, NC

      Beautiful words... just beautiful. She's very lucky, whoever she is...

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      Brian Lawson 5 years ago from Windsor, Va.

      This is some powerful poetry here! Voted up and beautiful!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @teaches, thank you for your support. you know where the sky is when two are together.

      @Laura, thank you Laura, for visiting my hub. I have missed you.

      @poet, thank you for your kind words. glad you liked my write.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Cleaner3, voted up, awesome, and beautiful. Such a beautiful poem Cleaner. Really enjoyed this one.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, what a truly inspiring outpouring of love! You are an amazing writer of such great passionate words. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Any woman that gets a tribute poem with this tenderness, is one lucky woman. I am so glad you share it with all your hub women.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ lyricwriter, thank you for your comments.

      @faith reaper, thanks for your kind words,glad you liked my poetry.

      @Linda, my lovely, thank you linda. you give me to much credit. She is a great inspiration.

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      ciaralw 5 years ago from San Diego, California

      Very beautiful.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      ciaralw, thank you for your kind comment.

      next time don't talk so much...

      I can't get a comment in edgewise. LOL

      Michael

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      SanneL 5 years ago from Sweden

      Michael, your passion and love flows like a warm summer breeze in between your tender words. So breathtakingly beautiful! Whatever or whoever brings you this wonderful inspiration, I'm so glad and thankful, because your brilliant writing brings much beauty and joy to my day.

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      Natasha 5 years ago from Hawaii

      Your words are beautiful and the flowers a stunning addition. This was a great thing to find in the morning before heading off to work!

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      Michael, you must surely be a true romantic. Your poems of love speak to the heart and bring the reader to his/her inner feelings. How could anyone read your beautiful words and not think of love? Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @Sanne....thank you for your kind words.If it wasn't for the beautiful women on the pages . I would be lost... I guess I really am lost... In love.LOL

      @Natasha, thanks for commenting on my poem. I made you happy to day. this makes me happy.

      @ Mary,thank you for your support. yes... love is always beautiful when romance is all wrapped up inside.

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      Sharilee Swaity 5 years ago from Canada

      Wow, cleaner, this is so, so lovely. These were my favourite lines:

      when we are lifted into the skies

      by our words so soft and real

      like the colors blue and teal ...

      Wonderful imagery, it just flows out. Have a wonderful weekend!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Princess, thank you for the comments. you are to kind.

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      LChristiane 5 years ago from Florida

      I have utterly missed your poetry. Voted up

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My lovely Dancer, i mave missed you. your hub is waiting. You still look beautiful.

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      Andee Rose Carpenter 5 years ago from Past the sunrise, left of the moon

      Oh, wow! What a romantic you are!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      My sweet Rose, thank you for commenting. glad you like my work

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      Jen Christopherson 5 years ago from Oklahoma, USA

      Titillating! Whew!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dreamer, dreamer, dreamer, you are always there for me. thank you dreamer, you know that i love you

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      ciaralw 5 years ago from San Diego, California

      A poet and a comedian huh? I Just viewed your comment. You are very welcome and I just can't help myself from talking so much! :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thats me, Michael the comedian who uses his humor to hide his broken heart.

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      ciaralw 5 years ago from San Diego, California

      You aren't alone Michael and you are exceptional company by the way. :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      ciarlw, I love your name it is so nice.

      I might even print it twice.

      you can keep me company anytime. my heart is always open for another lonely soul.

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      Lovely poem!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      sharon, thank you, your support is wanted and appreciated

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Feryal is so lucky to have you Michaels...what a delightful fantasy...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      raci, my lovely, fantasy is the best part of reality. thank you raci.

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      lifeoflata 5 years ago from Tacoma Wa

      Very nice and honest poem...the truest expression of love...very nice :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you lifeoflata, for the comment. glad you like the poem.

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