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~ Comely ~

Updated on May 22, 2015

~ Comely ~


♥ Dew-sodden bliss, gyres upon a petalled haze;

Each precious drop, a bead doth count, an hour of absent days;

That honey, I’m away from thee, my Queen, of pearls and lace;

Thy passion burns, amok, until I see your precious face.


I hear thee, and I want thee, yes indeed, my love, it’s you;

The woman who, inspires thy heart, with fires, hot and true.

I dream of you, upon my bed, caressing thee, my dame;

I see you in the flowers, yea, I hear thee in the rain.


Bedroom thoughts, of racing hearts, and sexual eyes a smoulder;

Kissing you, with nylon touch, your legs upon my shoulder.

Bided weeks, but still it’s thee, my dear, no longer wary;

Can't bear to be denied of you, my sweet plum, sugar Fairy. ♥

* Home-Made Edit - Supermodel Adriana Lima *

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    • Isaac White profile image

      TDM 3 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      Nice job.

      I.White

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you Isaac. I hope life is treating you well, and things are going your way. That little Hub that writinglover dedicated to you was pretty awesome.

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Loved it, R.Q! Again, thanks for the encouragement! My depression has completely disappeared! Voted it up!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      I'm so glad to hear that WL - you can't keep a good woman down :)

      Thank you.

      R.Q.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Well, my goodness, Romeos,

      You were inspired somewhere with this passionate piece here!

      Lovely first photo, but that second one whoa, little X rating or higher there.

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      Martin Kloess 3 years ago from San Francisco

      I'm surprised my computer did't catch fire.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Dear Faith;

      That photo was actually made available under the ' passionate couple ' word search, which was also a filtered search, but I've taken it down, as I don't want to offend anyone.But I'm glad that it was instrumental in pulling someone out of the doldrums of depression.

      Thank you for stopping by;

      Best wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Lol! Too hot then Mhatter99; it was written for a husband and wife couple, as was presented in the summary.

      Thank you;

      All the best,

      R.Q.

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      W1totalk 3 years ago

      Spicy. Sexy. Alluring. great poem.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, Dearest Romeos,

      Please do not remove anything, as this is your passionate piece here, and that photo ... was that and then some!

      Hugs and blessings,

      Faith Reaper

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      W1totalk

      Thanks for the vote of confidence!

      Have a great evening;

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Dearest Faith Reaper;

      No worries - In retrospect, I think you did me a favour :)

      Have a wonderful night, and thank you so much.

      With Warmest Regards,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Writer Chuck 3 years ago

      Another poem of love so descriptive and heart felt. It expresses two hearts apart that can't seem to be back together soon enough.

      Good job!

      Chuck

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hey! Thank you Writer Chuck - you got it completely.

      Have yourself a cracking day;

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Writer Chuck 3 years ago

      Thanks and you to!

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      skye2day 3 years ago from Rocky Mountains

      Dear Romeos I believe God designed marriage man and woman to 'feel' this way. So beautiful and tender. May we all aspire to love our spouse as this. Beautiful work bro. Wow. So far one of my favorite. Thank you so much. Sending hugs your way. God Bless you today and always. Skye.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      I couldn't agree more, dear Skye....It would be close to heaven, indeed, if one could feel like this all of the time about a husband/wife; hopefully, some poetic verse can act as oil in the machinery, making those relations so much simpler to accomplish and maintain, for where there is true love, then everything else usually seems to be there that goes with it, without either partner feeling as though they are missing out, or selling themselves short, so to speak, all based upon the firm foundation of His Agape.

      God Bless you too, as I have been by meeting you on here - you're like the sister I always wanted, as I have three( did have four ), though they are going their own way, but unhappy, but one seems to be interested in the Good News.

      Thank you Skye ( such a beautiful name ), and a lovely evening to you.

      R.Q.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      RQ,

      How did I miss this one? For one thing, even though I am a follower, I do not receive notifications very often regarding new publications. Perhaps, there's a button I need to push that I have not discovered.

      To me this is a poem about passion in its finest form. And, indeed, the partners who share this kind of fire are incredibly lucky.

      While it made me blush, that is okay with me. It makes me think that while I am old, maybe not too old. ; )

      Voted Up Awesome/Shared for others to feel this beautiful fire and passion.

      Best to you ALWAYS,

      Kim

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Kim! You're so lovely! Notifications don't always come through immediately sometimes. And you ain't old - who told you that? I agree, that when two people get it together like this in a marriage, it's just a purely magical time. Thanks a million for stopping by, and somehow, now feeling strangely drawn towards the wonderful land of the U. S of A. : )

      Have a perfect week;

      Warmest Regards,

      R.Q.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      I, ocfireflies, hereby appoint myself: An Ambassador of the U. S of A.

      Dear Sir RQ,

      Whether by plane or via a virtual world,

      I proclaim: Welcome to America!

      Sincerely,

      A Self-Appointed Ambassador of the U. S. of A.

      ; )

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