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~~~ Darling ~~~

Updated on January 3, 2014
" ... I am the sky,she is the sun ... "
" ... I am the sky,she is the sun ... "
" Her radiant presence ... "
" Her radiant presence ... "
" When dimming down,her fading light ... "
" When dimming down,her fading light ... "
" ... I want my baby in my life. "
" ... I want my baby in my life. "

~ Here's one I made earlier .... ~

~ Darling ~


The air breathes her

So I may live,

To speak her name,

My love,I give.

Attracts me,

Like no other woman,

One look from her,

My heart's a-running.


A simple beauty,who's

Naturally handsome;

Holding every heart

To ransom.

Knows,inside,

This velvet box,

What makes it tick,

My life,she rocks.


I am the sky;

She is the sun,

Who shines,in front

Of everyone.

She rises,in,

The early morn',

Parades her colours,

Amidst my dawn.


Her radiant presence,

Spells such good news,

Through turquoise skies,

She chases blues.

When roaring thunder,

Cracks,too loud,

I wrap her up,

Within my cloud.

When dimming down,

Her fading light,

I tuck her safe,

From wintry night.


I love her,now,

Much more than ever;

I'll stand by her,through

Stormy weather.

Answering,to

Her troubled strife,

I want my baby,

In my life.


This simple rhyme,

I pen,for you,

To help your hopes,and

Dreams,come true.


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      Jennifer 3 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      "Romeo, Romeo...where for art thou Romeo?" This was a sweet, sincere, poem by a talented writer. Well done! Voted up beautiful!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      writinglover

      Thank you for your generous comments.Time to visit my dear friend again,and check out some of your diverse writing.

      Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Sunny River 3 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

      Lovely and sweet. What a pleasure to read. :)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Sunny River

      Thank you for your marvelous comment,and stopping by.The verse you write on your page is good to read,and informative,as well.

      Much Appreciated,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      That is a lucky lady to have inspired such a poem. Really lovely!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Theater girl

      It was inspired by a young woman who I fell for quite a while back,who was autistic - she was a model.

      Thank you for your wonderful comment;

      Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q,

      Oh this is such a tender, sweet beauty! I love this, it brings such a comforting smile. I sense a wee bit of pain, but that is easily distracted by the beautiful sentiments of the undying love for another. "I am the sky; She is the sun, Who shines, in front of everyone"; I don't know what it was, but that just absolutely stuck with me... and "When roaring thunder, Cracks,too loud, I wrap her up, Within my cloud". Just sweet descriptions of a how you perceive your love and how you want to keep your love safe. I don't know... it just touched me! Beautiful Romeo!

      Yours,

      Cat

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      epigramman 3 years ago

      Well Mister Romeo you could give Sir Paul (McCartney) a run for his money with something as romantic and utterly poetic as this .

      Let me just say that your lady friend is the luckiest gal in the world to receive your poetic affections and I am a lucky reader to be inspired as well - maybe if I write like this/like you , I might get lucky too.

      Sending you warm wishes from Colin and his cats watching the daybreak over the lake after night shift for me at lake erie time canada 6:00am

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Only you can put fingertips on my poems now.I'm so glad that you liked enjoyed it-you definitely gripped the message.

      Thank you,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Good Morning Colin,and your felicitous friends of feline fur (.")(",)

      To be uttered in the same sentence as one of the greatest songwriters of the twentieth century,is indeed an honour,and doubly so,seeing as it is your kind self that has written it.

      I shall drop by a little later to peruse the bullion that I'm sure is waiting.

      I checked out your female artist 'Youtube' recommendation,and disappointment became a stranger.Thanks.

      Sending you warm greetings from unusually,sunny England.Have a good sleep!

      Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      The one thing about poetry is often what the author intends and what the readers perceive are two different things. Personally, I'm not so concerned with what anyone gets out of my writings, it's subjective and so long as it causes some enjoyment and evokes any emotions or feelings, then I'm happy. However, I do fear "misinterpreting" the works of others because I can't presume that all feel the way I do. I feel that I understand where you're coming from... in all your writings, as I can relate to them as well. If I ever "miss" the point... don't be afraid to letmehearuscream! :-)

      Mornin' sunshine!

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      .. And a very good morning to you!

      I never knew that the sun could be in two places,at once. This diurnal disc I'm seeing,arching through the topaz ether has your face emblazened all over it,warming me with your healing beams,and charging this fool with happiness. :)

      To be honest,I'm pleased with whatever people can take out of the writing- there's always something different for everyone.Your offerings are always fun to read,and delightful -a bit like their author.

      Sometimes it's impossible to know what was in the mind of the author when they wrote their piece,unless you ask them;even then,they might not know themselves if they were three sheets to the wind at the time lol!

      Today just got better;

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Oh Romeo! ;-)

      Let me tell you... if you could see my face right now you'd probably chuckle to yourself... the things you say have a tendency to create a big, cheesy awkward smile :D Thank you!

      Good to know! You seem to be so detailed and descriptive, though your language is deep and intricate, it all seems so obvious to me. Perhaps it has something to do with you speaking the words I long to hear :-)

      You're so sweet... I can't get enough!

      With much much love,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Can I have a 'Cheesy,awkward smile' to go,please?Thank you. :P

      The fact that you understand might have something to do with the fact that you are a perceptive,highly intelligent,unique woman,who deserves to be treated like this,and more so.

      Yours(twice as much as yesterday,but half as much as tomorrow),

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Yes, you can have one to go, but I'd rather you stay ;-)

      Ahhh, just got back from a doctor's appointment and he confirmed I'm crazy 'bout you. (How corny was that?)

      You're so wonderful!!! It's probably a good thing you live so far away or I'd probably be on your front lawn! Thank you so much for making me feel so awesome! I think you're pretty special too! :-)

      Yours,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      If you was on my front lawn,it would probably take me a week to find you- it's like a jungle,after the winter,and I'm on the case.... although knowing my luck,you're probably married,but regardless of status,doesn't change the fact you're amazing,with a magnetic personality-it's mesmerizing @,@

      Your Hypnotized Hubber,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Too funny... I don't know who's luckier; you with a jungle or me with a bare, bald front lawn!? Actually, I'm not married... and I can say that without seeming to forward because you are thousands of miles away :-) Just a friendly factoid. Besides... you run with models... geesh. I'll take your flattering comments though... and I offer you them two-fold!

      Your Jealous Juliet? :-)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      I like friendly factoids,and bald lawns :)

      Besides;I'm single,and stress free,at the moment.I reckon I would be punching above my weight,so to speak,with you though-you're so pretty,and way out of my league,but one can dream.I don't normally go for the model type;just a one-off choice.

      Yours,With Trans-Atlantic frustration,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Well, I know a thing or two about friendly factoids and bald lawns, so I guess we're a match made in heaven! :-)

      Out of your league? Now I know you're just humoring me. Heck, you could have the looks of Quasimoto and I could still fall for you! Gee, your words are to die for... :-)

      Only have ears for you,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      I like that.I'm glad to say that I don't look like Quasimodo,otherwise I would have the hump(that corn is contagious-must see your doctor!)-just an average looking man,who likes what he sees ... a lot.

      I don't have to think twice about you.I'll take your ears as a down payment,then. :)

      Yours,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Aw, now how could I not love a guy with a sweet tongue and a helluva sense of humor? I have to admit, I'm a bit intimidated by your writing, gosh, I'm almost embarrassed when you come over my way. :-) (Don't stop coming though) I don't believe I have ever met anyone in life... real life, that produces the words you do. I'm just blown away...

      I'll have to find something better than my ears to offer for the next payment :-)

      You're a doll!

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Please don't feel intimidated by the writing-even the word 'knife' won't cut you on my page :)-it's all safe.I really like you,and treat you as equal because you are;Cat;I was brought up in hell's kitchen like a lot of other people,and chewed on some of the same dirt as you,and many others,so I try to never look down on anyone.

      Keep those ears,babe;they look better on you,and the next payment?Forget it!Your dreamy eyes have already made me a debtor to your melting gaze ... phew!!

      There is only one Cat;

      Yours Truly,

      R,Q.

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      frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

      Endearing. I liked this a lot. You have a hauntingly sweet pen Romeo -- Cheers.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thanks, frankieonfire - I love reading your works.

      Have a lovely evening;

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      RQ,

      Greetings! Love this one. In fact, while it is very difficult to choose, this is my favorite poem by you. Nicely done with such awesome imagery.

      Voted up/Beautiful

      Best Always,

      Kim

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Many thanks for dropping by Kim, and I'm really glad that you found that this one especially appealed to you,

      Have a lovely evening;

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      This is very, very good, I love it.

      I am not getting notices of your writings so I quit and refollowed you. That happens sometimes for some reason and that is what I must do. Look forward to catching up.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thanks Jackie; pleased you liked the writing, and grateful that you've taken the effort, to do what you have done.

      Enjoy a splendid day;

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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