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~~~ Days ~~~

Updated on May 22, 2015
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~ Days ~



V1/ First word,"Daddy!", from a baby's laughter,

Cements my faith, in a firm hereafter;

The li'l girls' thanks, for her birthday gift,

Rings finer than the sound, from Beethoven's Fifth.


V2/ A searching question, with a healing answer,

Like the pirouette, from a graceful dancer.

Captured seconds, of serendipity,

A breath of life, from lady liberty.

Few, are the moments, that make you live,

To cherish the sweet; to honour and give.


V3/ Cast adrift, in the sea of her eyes,

Emergency!, my heart capsized;

Her pupils, teach me how to swim

Those deep-blue pools, that I'm lost in.


V4/ A taste of bliss, is stored, my muse,

To wax your smile, and chase your blues;

Pure gold, new house, luxurious bedding, with a

Triple-barrelled name, no shotgun wedding.


V5/ Soaked in a debt, of labour's love,

This mind, shall always summon;

New pictures of you, and the things that you do,

My beautiful, wonder-woman.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Aww...this was sweet and touching! Voted it up beautiful and sharing!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thanks,writinglover;you're very kind.I need to read some more of your work soon,to see what's in that journal.......:)

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      My newest favorite! ...not of yours, of any! Aww you had me at Daddy, but it got even sweeter. :-) Oh, how a girl can appreciate this poem, a boy will never know. Love it Romeo!

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Thank you so much.You are always very generous when you comment,and I really do appreciate every word you say;I shall distill them,and treat them as a man would a fifteen year-old Irish/Scottish Whiskey.

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Aww, you're so sweet... gee , the words you speak in comments is poetry in itself. I should put some quotes around it, add a picture and call it a hub :D

      I really did like this one though, it's very special and the connection between a girl and her father and then her husband.... is often true; your version is so sweet and beautiful.

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      I think I'm going to be wearing out the words 'Thank you',with you around! You're so kind!

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      You can't wear out those words :D

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Thank you,thank you,thank you,thank you,thank you,thank you,thank you.....you know what? I think you're right babe :)

      You always amaze me,

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Ha ha ha... yes, I'm sure I am.

      Aw thanks, right back at ya!

      Yours,

      Cat

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      Marsha Musselman 3 years ago from Michigan, USA

      This is nice and nostalgic. I'd like to suggest that you put a space after each of your commas. Other than that it looks good.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Marsha Musselman1

      Done.Thanks for the tip.I hope you find the verse more aesthetically pleasing.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      No probs.Cheers,

      R.Q.

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      LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautiful!! I see the appreciation of little things in life that means so much...... True joy! Great poem..... You are, my friend, a wonderful poet!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      LaThing

      Thank you so much;it is the little things,isn't it,that make all the difference?

      Have a lovely day,

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's

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