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~~~ Dear Eve.... ~~~

Updated on December 17, 2013

~ Dear Eve ... ~


Finally.....


As winters’, nebulous clouds conceal streaked lightning, so you play with hope, in haughty hollow, to capture a conscience with thy heart, that thou's consort lives within, to make him prisoner to thy affections.

This love shalt not bow to time, nor could its expense be bartered so cheaply. My heart was never false to thee dearest *********. Did you harvest our summer love, born in hazy days, too early, to leave my field bare with famine? Then gorge thyself, but knowest that thee will becometh the architect of thine own, unpardonable want in times’ future.


To coop up unseen beauty is a crime ‘gainst its beholder. How couldst there ever be a heaven waiting for us when cowardice seeks to take you for his very own? Thy Princess may overcometh, for she receives down-payments of Marquis strength for the express purpose of our prosperity.


Will my love turn to love? Will she allow death to rob her passing beauty?
Changest your thoughts to change yourself. I chose to believe in you ‘till you decided to believe yourself, lest thou thinketh herself useless and selfish, marinaded in rapturous fancies of vanity's keep.


Night’s lofty jewels once whispered of us to each other within jealous twinkles, and one couldst prognosticate their future, but they not ours, by reading the forecast in your eyes, which beheld thee in loving visions ‘neath their evening, sable baldachin. Whensoever the blazing candle of azure vault made you happy, though didst his charring,ochre disc abscond with your physical beauty, I fought every rousing daybreak to give it back to you with my words to thee, in order to restoreth that fairness which was stolen upon a glorious noon.


I know the ungrateful tried to pillage your best strength, my silent coquette, and arrayed your trust with threadbare rags, leaving you cold and ill-equipped for the ensuing storms which ye bore, in private rooms, alone, with no one to understand or hold your hand. Those wander years took much from you, when receipts of lies dripped pendants from your crystal veils of marine, when thy heart opened silkened doors, forced open by a cheated, exasperated life; I tried every day with thy poetry to give back that which you had lacked for so long from my own store – do not despise me nor make thee your drudge, waiting, and reporting here with electronic type, searching for answers I should already own.


If thou desirest, pay no heed to these weighed words of thine, which fly upon your thermals, towards their true home, but, my poisoned chalice, I pray that you listen to your heart. Let my boldness clothe thee and its cheer enswathe you with continual, enveloping affection.


You have much love to give, my life, which has pitched up its tent in many places, but my wish is that it finds its home in your beloved; but alas, hope must fly into time's chill December eve, far from vernal, moonlit mists in yonder's troth, to sentinel forever in perpetual memoir of nevermore.


Exeunt

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Very beautiful, as always, R.Q! Voted it up!

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      Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

      Very beautiful RQ. There was a whole love story and then acceptance deftly placed in your words.

      The final episode of the princess tale whom sadly was too lost in her past world to see a future one.

      I liked the freewritten style you used and I am glad you have moved on from the lost princess and are beyond it.

      I could be way off and it may just be beautiful fiction. :)

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      Ann Carr 3 years ago from SW England

      Sad, sad, sad. A melancholy one and full of regret, dashed hope and what might have been. Great poetry in one of your many styles.

      Grey and windy here. Hope it's not so wild in your neck of the woods.

      Happy Christmas to you. Ann

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago

      I imagine the woman who these words should make a difference, but do not...I see the man whose words he has carved out of his breaking heart.

      Blessings,

      Kim

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, my goodness, lovely put, dear Romeos ... but so sad, another gone ... or is this the same one but still saying goodbye perhaps?

      I really love the flow here in this one tale of dashed love and telling her like it is ...

      Superb write.

      Up and more and sharing

      Blessings and peace,

      Faith Reaper

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very well done Romeo. Poignant, yet beautiful.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you Flash! Hope you're excited for Christmas.

      Sending Kind Regards, for a wonderful and happy time this year.

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Anna,

      I trust you are well, and certainly appreciate your commentary, which you pretty much nailed again with your wonderfully, insightful artistic perception. Indeed; just wrapping up some loose ends, though it would have been preferable to be tying up a seasonal bow for her instead; it's just a shame that some folk cannot see, or perhaps cannot fully absorb when a better life is being handed to them on a silver platter, but are still hung up on the ghost of Christmas past, so to speak. Oh well.....we live and learn, and am positive that the good will make way for the better.

      Thank you for coming by dear Anna, and would like to offer you the very best of the season for a joyful and happy time with friends/family, and also thank you for your support during the year for some of the pieces.

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Good Evening Ann,

      Yes, it's sad city for sure, saddled by, I suppose, what will be regret on her part when it finally clicks what potential future happiness just slipped through our fingers. I couldn't do any more for her than I did, and if my best isn't good enough for a woman who doesn't know what she wants, and changes her mind, I'm at a loss as to what to do.No chagrin, but just surprised and a bit numb because I haven't got a clue what just happened.

      On a lighter note, I hope you have a prized suitor to do the honours with under the mistletoe :)

      Thanks for your kind comments and yes, the wind has started to kick up a bit now, so time to batten down the hatches. Stay safe, and in turn, send warm Christmas wishes to you for a fun and happy time of celebration.

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you Kim and glad for you in relation to the recent graduation of your youngest son from University. Time for a good 'ol knees up and pleased to hear your good news - always feels that much better when it is received by someone who really deserves a permanent smile.

      Your remarks are very sobering, and felt it would be dishonest to write otherwise. Hopefully, someone might be able to take something useful from this experience, good and bad.

      Have a lovely Christmas Kim with your pride and joy, and here's to good times ahead.

      Warm Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Faith Reaper,

      I can't access your newest Hub, possibly because you've taken it offline for a while to give it a tweak or two.

      Thanks for leaving your generous words here today, and yes, it was the same one; just seemed as though a page was missing and this was it, to finish a perplexing chapter and close the book before a new year is ushered in.

      Just received an E-mail from a Publications Executive inviting me to submit ten pieces of my work for a new book to be published next year called ' Ten Of The Best - 2014 ', so after the bad news, along comes the good :)

      Certainly look forward to reading your new Hub article in the future as the front page looked quite interesting; intriguing even.

      Sending Warmest Regards for a lovely evening for you and your family.

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Wayne, man of miracle!

      I sure hope you're doing alright and well within yourself.

      Much appreciated, you flying over for a gander at the goods, and for apportioning your uplifting comments.

      I've heard that men who don't understand women fall into two categories; husbands and bachelors lol!

      Take it easy, and sending good vibes to you and your nearest and dearest for a marvellous Christmas ahead.

      All the Best,

      R.Q.

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      wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

      Oh, R.Q. , there is some lovely lady out there who will appreciate you. Be patient in your finding. The wait will be worth it.

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      Suzette Walker 3 years ago from Taos, NM

      Saddest breaking up poem I have ever read. Beautiful words you have for her beyond belief. I feel your heart breaking! Well said and well done.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

      Romeos, CONGRATULATIONS on your invitation to be published. This piece, like all the rest deserves to shared in a much wider readership. All the very best!

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      Ann Carr 3 years ago from SW England

      Thanks for your good wishes and yes, I have a much prized suitor, thankfully - who needs mistletoe?!!

      Congratulations on your publishing! Ann

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Good Morning Wetnosedogs,

      Thanks for coming by with such kindness.

      To be honest, I was never really looking for a woman, and never really do - it just sort of ' happened ', and she showed promise of perhaps being special.

      Sending Christmas wishes to you and the shaggy woofs.

      Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Suzettenaples,

      The saddest part is, I don't even believe that the break was because of us.

      Life experience is telling me that there is something more deep underlying the whole shebang; I hope to God it's not some kind of physical/mental/sexual abuse when she was a child. If so, I could never even hope for her to open that part of herself to me, being a man; I understand how devastating that can be to carry in life, causing a variety of damage and even deviating a woman's sexuality.

      The best I can hope for is that she finds some kind of healing/salvation because I love her, which will never change.

      Thanks a million for stopping by and send you and your family my very best for a peaceful and joyful Christmas season.

      With Warm Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Always a pleasure to 'see' you here MsDora with such class and splendour.

      Thank you indeed for your uplifting comments, and if the publishers will let me, would like to list a few people off of HP, yourself included, in the preface, to say ' Thank you ', at the very least, for being such marvellous ladies, not to mention experienced and professional scribes in your own right.

      Sending this along with hearty Christmas blessings for you and your family, and hope that you enjoy your trip in the forthcoming new year.

      With Kindest Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      You're right dear Ann; who needs it? Glad to hear things are well for you in the south-west ( now quite sunny here in the north-east; piercing blue skies, with not a cloud in view - doesn't feel like winter at all at the present ).

      Thank you for your support, which is certainly appreciated, and additionally, would like to send all the very best to you and your kinfolk for a splendid, and joyous Christmas.

      Warm Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, how wonderful dear Romeos, the new book publication that is! I cannot think of a better title than that for your amazing writing! I surely must purchase one once it is published to cherish forever. Looks like 2014 is already shaping up nicely for you. You are so deserving, as millions should be reading your work. (((Hugs))) and much love your way, Faith Reaper

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Seems to always be that one and the longing and wondering what might have been can never truly leave us can it? Beautifully said and perfect song, which was new to me.

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      Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

      Thank you too and have a peaceful and happy Christmas. :)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Faith Reaper,

      Thanks for your kindness, and I could never take a brass farthing from a lady, so when time decides to fly parallel with its inception, and if you still wish for one, I shall send this fair maiden and amazing writer a free copy.

      Sending warm regards for a peaceful night;

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Indeed Jackie; that fork in the road where one turns left and the other right....hopefully not round the bend lol!

      " Parting is such sweet sorrow ", as the Bard once wrote.

      It's a good song isn't it? Sort of reminiscent of the Mamas & Papas.

      Best Wishes,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      You're very welcome Anna, and the very best of Christmas to you also.

      With Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      O' Romeos, Romeos, wherefore art thou dear Romeos? Hope you are enjoying this New Year and I pray it holds many new blessings and much love.

      I love your new quote up there on your profile. It is so YOU!

      Just checking in on you dear one.

      Hugs,

      Faith Reaper

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Dearest Faith Reaper,

      Firstly, I'd like to send my very best wishes to you and your family for a blessed and happy New Year, and all of the, as yet, concealed joy and excitement it is sure to contain for you; the very special and eponymous heroine of HubPages.

      How uncanny! I was just thinking of you, and like an angelic messenger of undisclosed worth, you appeared, and left such conscientious consideration from such a heart of great magnitude, which I have never known. Thank you.

      The year has begun with its mixed cocktail of yesteryears' dying rumours trying to creep upon the canvas of January's blank page, sober expectations of good times ahead and a thankful heart in readiness for learning to love more wisely - so difficult to do properly, which you seem to do so well.

      I sincerely hope you are in good health Faith, because you always fill my heart with joy. Also, I'm sure that your kiddywinkles made Christmas that little more special for you; it seems that much more special when little ones are around at such a notable time of good cheer.

      Thank you for your kindness which is just out of this world.

      Sending loving regards for a peaceful evening;

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Aw, my goodness, I am so sorry for inquiring of you and then retiring to bed and not waiting to see if you were going to respond, as I did not think you would so quickly! Speaking of one so kind ... you are so kind to think of me, and that is uncanny indeed : )

      I am fine and had a lovely Christmas and ready for a New Year of whatever God has planned for me! I just know this year will hold many new blessings and much love, true love, for you! I am thrilled to know of your thankful heart and willingness to love once again. Oh, no, I do not know how to do such, just had to learn over the years to not make it all about me (unselfish) and look for the best in others, as there is not one of us perfect for sure, especially me!

      You are a special person with a tremendous gift and I know there is that special someone just right for you, who will love you for you, as there is much to love indeed.

      Hugs and thank you for responding so quickly.

      You are a dear,

      Faith Reaper

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, I just saw an email where you had published a hub, but I do not see it. Will try this evening when I return home from work.

      Have a blessed day dear one,

      Faith Reaper

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      You too; drive safely!

      R.Q.

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