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~~~ Princess Of My Heart ~~~

Updated on May 31, 2013

~Princess Of My Heart ~

TWO VOCALISTS - ONE MALE,ONE FEMALE



V1/ Public confessions of private intentions,

Her marriage ideas, have suffered detention;

Expounding less, than she often would think,

When emotional ties were led to the brink.


V2/ Sometimes it's hard, to muster a smile,

When the love of your life lives in denial.

Working all day can become a trial,

After sleep has fled from your eyes;

Should he place her white veil, on their sweet-scented bed,

To the aisle, say his farewell goodbyes?


CHORUS/ Take my hand, and end your pain;

Our hearts are gonna take the strain;

Come into our lives, again,

To be my wife, my precious gem.


V3/ If love can't win your hand, today,

There remains only this, that's left to say.

The perfect man, with forever on his mind,

Was sent your way, but you were blind.

He smiled for only you,that day,

Your autograph, on his heart, will stay.


BRIDGE

VERSE/ End this tug of love, you're starting,

Thinking, loving, pretty darling.

Don't strive for the the reminder, of a loveless life,

To bear the shame, Miss No-one's wife.


REPEAT CHORUS


V4/ Dispense with the struggle, this cerebral juggle,

Come back where you rightfully belong;

You were meant for me, Oh baby can't you see?

You're the life, and soul of this song.


SECOND CHORUS (Then Repeat To Fade........................)



NEW CHORUS - BEGINS AT appoximately 1min 35 secs. and ENDS AT approximately 1min 51 secs.


Him - Please don't leave me,

Her - I won't leave you,

Him - Say you need me,

Her - I need you too;

Him - Just don't leave me,

Her - Would I leave you?

Him - Babe, I love you,

Her - Swear, I do too.


Him - I won't leave you,

Her - Please don't leave me,

Him - I just need you,

Her - I need you too;

Him - Would I leave you?

Her - You won't leave me!

Him - Forever, love you,

Her - Swear you'll be trueeeee ....................(accentuated, last word, leading into next verse. First word of verse overlays the last word of chorus, to give the sense of an understated, desperate, momentum).


Each alternate line, to be fired, successively, like a machine-gun, with heartfelt sincerity.

~ Instrumental Only - * An Original Song * ~

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      I think this is one of my favorite pieces that you have written so far. Beautifully written. Enough said! :D Voted it up!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hey, thank you WL.Hope you're having an amazing weekend so far,and again, thanks a million for the vote.I think it is one of the best pieces I've produced, so far, so you're spot on.All the best!

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      P.S. I've tried to get to read your new writings WL, and I saw them in the notifications, but I was called away, to try and help a distressed young woman who is going through a lot of emotional turbulence, which I think, spending time away from a not-very understanding girlfriend, has cost me that relationship, but I'll check them out A.S.A.P., and looking forward to your new stories.

      R.Q.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Hi, R.Q! Take your time. Somebody out there needed your help, so I really don't mind if you don't get to my stuff right away. Ironically, I was revising my hub on abuse and neglect (which mainly involves emotional and verbal turbulence--not that I'm making assumptions here) when you left this comment. See you! :D

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      That Hub sounds interesting, WL.I'll have to have a gander at that one!

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      How many times am I allowed to say "I think this one's my favorite"? :-)

      Seriously, it's absolutely awesome and I love it!!! Not only are there sentiments in there that so many can relate to, but the lyrics are wonderful and the rhythm and flow are equally impressive.

      Great instrumental, by the way!

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      You can say it as often as you like, sweetheart, and I'm sure never to get tired of hearing such liquid honey pour from your dulcet tones.

      Many thanks for your insightful comments, which are always encouraging;

      Truly, thou art a Princess amongst women.

      Yours,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Alright... can I say that was my favorite?

      I suppose you ought to get used to it, because it happens to be a regular occurance ;-)

      Thanks darling!

      Yours,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Mwah!

      R.Q.

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Mwah, right back!

      Cat

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      Martin Kloess 3 years ago from San Francisco

      Very smooth. Look forward to a YouTube version. In the meantime let's get more Hubbers your way. (shared)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hey! Thanks a million, Mhatter99.

      That's really kind and decent of you to share, and I sincerely appreciate your input, especially as you're a man with exemplary credentials.

      Have a peaceful weekend;

      All the best,

      R.Q.

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      I am following Mhatter here and thats the least i can do so far...and from so far.....LOL....its soul touching master piece and sure would wait for the YouTube version........Sharing across the board..tweeted and votes all up awesome..take care

      Many blessings and smiles your way:-)

      deergha

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      I followed Martin (Mhatter) here also, I wanted to see what all the fuss was about....you now have a new fan; nice work!!.. :).

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Beautiful write here.It smoothly flows ..Its imagery is wonderful.I really like it.Voted up

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      I like this very much. The style is lovely and as usual your words paint a picture!

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      Suzette Walker 3 years ago from Taos, NM

      This song and the music is absolutely beautiful. I love the video and the slides you chose for it. Your song is so heartfelt and warm. You are very talented!

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      So many great lines that it is hard to choose--but here are a few of my favorites:

      "Your autograph, on his heart, will stay."

      "To bear the shame, Miss No-one's wife."

      "Public confessions of private intentions,"

      Voted up and Awesome!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi deergha

      Many thanks for your truly awesome comments.

      I had a female vocalist lined up, to help bring the lyrics to life, but she is pregnant now, so I won't be able to make a full video as yet, until I've remedied the situation.

      All the very best,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      tobusiness

      Hey there!

      Pleased to 'meet' you, and thank you so much for stopping by, and I a feel very grateful, for the attention of my new fan.Thank you, and enjoy a lovely weekend.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thanks James.

      You are indeed a gentleman and a scholar, and I'm always impressed when I read your verse.

      Take it easy.

      Best wishes;

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Theater girl

      I'm glad you like the style, and the mental pictures it creates, because I'm equally taken aback when digesting some of your wonderful poetry - there is one in particular that sticks with me.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      suzettenaples

      So very pleased that this song appealed to you sweetheart.I added a few slides just to make it slightly more interesting, until I complete a full video.

      I love your work!

      Enjoy a peaceful weekend.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Kim!

      Thanks for taking the time to leave your insightful comments, and wonderful remarks; somehow, I can't envision you as being ' Miss No-One's Wife ' : )

      Have a lovely weekend.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      I'd like to add, that I have been astonished this evening, by all of the wonderful comments for this piece by such enormous talents, and truly beautiful people.It was as though looking at the night sky, and seeing some of the brightest chinks of sparkle twinkling down, when reading all of these positive, and uplifting messages.So thank you one, and all, especially Mhatter99 for being such a kind, and selfless man;I'd have a drink at your tea party any day of the week lol!

      Thanks a million,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      I am so glad! Which one? If I may ask? And I am honored that you say so. ;)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Theater girl

      The one that I like particularly, is entitled, ' Casualties Of A Poets' War '.

      It had just the right portions of wit, humour, word-craft, intelligence, and honesty, I thought, conjuring up a heady cocktail of mental images, which I enjoyed long after I had read its verse. :)

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you for telling me! I am so thrilled that it resonated with you! - jennifer

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Anytime, Jennifer. :)

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

      Great sentiments - well said and I can almost twirl around in the love felt here. Cheers

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      frakieonfire

      Thanks for the touching comments;twirl away, to your hearts' content!

      Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautiful, RQ! Sorry, have been away..... missed all your great work! Will catch up. Love this one.... Thanks for sharing :)

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      frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

      RQ -

      I just had to reread it to make sure I had the beat down. Now I am twirling away - just make me stop before I get too dizzy. :)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      LaThing

      What do you mean you've been away? You must be punished immediately lol!! : )

      I'm grateful just to have you have a little occasional looksy at some of the verse, but I certainly don't expect yourself, or anyone else to feel compelled to check out all of the work, as there is so much of it now, and there just wouldn't be enough hours in the day to look in depth at everybody's pieces, so I simply thank you for stopping by.

      Have a wonderful day;

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      frankieonfire

      Aargh! I can't stop you; You're too far away! : )

      Thanks sweetheart, for stopping by; keep dancing, but don't overdo it!

      All the best,

      R.Q.

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      LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Awww, you are a sweetheart! I love your poems, and to tell you the truth haven't had a chance to read even a small portion of it! Love to have that time in hand.... LOL!

      Take care :)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thanks, La Thing. How it flies!

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Two months ago! Wow, boy did I miss out on this phenomenal piece here, but I am here now. This may be my favorite so far that I have read, but I know, I must have not read all yet.

      Your words have such artistry, mixed with a lot of reality there. Absolutely love your song! Wow, wow, wow is all I can say.

      Your choice of imagery is always stunning.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      I think you have a hit! Love it. Great photos too. ^

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Oh nicely done!! Sing it!!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you Jackie for dropping by, and leaving such uplifting commentary! Have a lovely evening in the ' Beautiful South '.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi Faith Reaper!

      To elicit a wow just gets me right there.

      Many thanks for being so supportive of the writing, and for liking this song I created.

      Enjoy a lovely evening;

      Warmest Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Dear Audrey;

      Much obliged to you....I'm singing it! :)

      A wonderful eve to you, from an autumnal-feeling England;

      Kindest Regards,

      R.Q.

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      HappyMikeWritter 3 years ago

      My friend! What an amazing writing. Your tallent is endless. I trully enjoy reading your stuff! Keep it up as your work makes us feel better :-)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hey Happy Mike!

      I hope you are well my friend, and it's good to hear from you.I'm also glad that you enjoyed the writing, and that it makes you all feel better, as I try to illuminate realistic hope in situations that can often appear dire; to attempt to turn them around, and come out smelling of roses, and also to solidify the love and friendship between man and woman.

      Mind how you go, and I hope today brings good things your way.

      Best Wishes,

      Romeo's Quill

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      HappyMikeWritter 3 years ago

      Reading your articles does it for me. Is an A-class reading and learning from you throught out of your work. Thank you :-)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Glad that you find it improves your English, although it is already very good.

      All the best,

      R.Q.

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Truly beautiful Romeo.

      Eddy.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Much appreciated Eddy, and thank you for such warm and uplifting observations.

      Warm Regards, to you and yours;

      R.Q

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