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She Was Hit By The Punch Of Love (Poetry)

Updated on December 24, 2015

The Impact of Love is Like A Knocked In Punch

I’m going to use love

For the chance to be yours,

You’d find I’m someone special

Couldn’t find me in stores,

Packing all you need of a good man

At the top of the pack is love,

Just be a loving woman

And what you’re made of,

You’re made precious, pure and sweet

You’re yummy soul mate meat,

Want to make it with you in life

And squash whatever the strife,

Nothing could hold us back

From feeling oh so real,

Do more than loving in the sack

All of our time should be a big thrill,

Let’s do most things together,

Time with the boys out is gone,

I’ve discovered a brand new mellowness,

That I can hang with all day long,

Thanks for letting me relieve you

Of all that past loneliness,

You now have greater things to do

You can please me with loveliness,

I’m taken to a whole new world

Full of nothing but your delight,

I’m finally with my kind of girl

To love you by day and bless you at night

Love is the best of you

Whether you believe it or not,

I guess I must have hit you

With my very best shot.


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  • sujaya venkatesh profile image

    sujaya venkatesh 

    4 years ago

    love a life

  • word55 profile imageAUTHOR

    Al Wordlaw 

    4 years ago from Chicago

    Thank you Shyron for stopping by and commenting. Hope all is going well for you and yours :-)

  • Shyron E Shenko profile image

    Shyron E Shenko 

    4 years ago from Texas

    Very romantic Al, hope you have a special someone to read it to.

    liked your video of Pat Benatar, she is a good singer.

  • word55 profile imageAUTHOR

    Al Wordlaw 

    4 years ago from Chicago

    Thanks LadyFiddler for stopping by and leaving that great advice. I shall do just that. Have a blessed day!

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    Joanna Chandler 

    4 years ago from On planet Earth

    Nicely done word , keep your love ever burning for your wife :)

    God will bless you for it.

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    Rose Quirante 

    4 years ago

    nice poem word...

  • word55 profile imageAUTHOR

    Al Wordlaw 

    4 years ago from Chicago

    Thanks Teaches, you're so appreciated too!

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    Dianna Mendez 

    4 years ago

    What a romantic poem. I love the positive outlook and hope the relationship blossoms.

  • word55 profile imageAUTHOR

    Al Wordlaw 

    4 years ago from Chicago

    Hey oldies, glad you like this poem, how coooool it is and P Benatar's cool video.

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    4 years ago from United States

    I love the title of your poem... certainly grabs your attention The rhyming is coooool :)

    I also liked your video of Pat Benatar there. :)

    Thanks for posting.

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    Dana Tate 

    4 years ago from LOS ANGELES

    "Your made precious and sweet, your yummy male soul meat". Funny line.. and adorable poem. Thanks for sharing.

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    Al Wordlaw 

    4 years ago from Chicago

    Yes Suzanne, feeling "squishy," Thank you so much for stopping by. Always good to see you. Be blessed!

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    Devika Primić 

    4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

    Great words from you and you certainly showed your romantic side here. You must do what is best liked and enjoyed.

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    Suzanne Day 

    4 years ago from Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

    Lovely poem and a good one to make you feel squishy. I particularly liked the lines "Just be a loving woman / And what you’re made of," which is so apt. Voted beautiful!

  • word55 profile imageAUTHOR

    Al Wordlaw 

    4 years ago from Chicago

    Hey Jodah, Thanks for stopping by. I just enjoy writing this kind of stuff. I must really love you all :-). Sometimes, I'll put this stuff it to music. Anyway, when I meet the one who deserves it then I'll write her one and recite it to her. Glad you asked!

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    John Hansen 

    4 years ago from Queensland Australia

    Very romantic poetry word55. Have you recited this to that special lady? I am sure she would love it. Well done.

  • word55 profile imageAUTHOR

    Al Wordlaw 

    4 years ago from Chicago

    Hi Trish and Little One, Glad you enjoyed the poem. Bless you much!

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    Trisha Roberts 

    4 years ago from Rensselaer, New York

    Awww this is such a beautiful poem! Had me all teary eyed! Absolutely wonderful. Love has the power to make life.. just that much better. :) Wonderful hub!


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