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~~~ So Far away ~~~

Updated on January 5, 2014

~ So Far Away ~


V1/ Struggles, restrained, under firm lock and key,

Vaulted words, shackle-bound here, whenever I see;

Blithely portraits of thee, kismet leaves no escape;

From these every, sweet passionate, thoughts that you take.


V2/ To quell one’s own heart with dual conquering hands,

Which repress, lest this velveteen, leap-bounds, to land,

‘Pon thy body, and soul, masked in lover’s disguise,

Must we breathe secret sighs, under different skies?


To be….


V3/ Singed, by stoked fires, which reside in thine eyes,

Duly burned, by bronzed brushes, from smooth, silkened thighs;

Honeyed, cherry-stung lips, bait with zeal, appetize,

Sparking amorous embrace, vehemently telling no lies.


V4/ Do not bring me dolour, ‘midst this fervent new day;

Just kiss thee, with feeling, my sweet fiancée;

Abandon your doubt, worthless thoughts, nay, hold back,

For your man, he owns nothing, which you’ll surely lack.


V5/ Let's tear frenzied breaths, of conjoined, swaying frames, and

In bliss, ardently scream out each other’s first names;

Honeymoon in rapture, deigns our new promised land,

That be sealed, as we clasp eager, warm, wedding hands.

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      Jennifer 3 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      As always, R.Q! Your work is simply stellar! Beautifully 'quilled.' Voted it up!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Flash!!! It's you! :) Thank you for your lovely comments, and I do hope Wednesday hasn't bored to half to death lol! You are so wonderful, and it's always a pleasure having you drop by for a quick shufty of the quilled goods :)

      Wishing you a perfect evening WL;

      R.Q.

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      skye2day 3 years ago from Rocky Mountains

      Romeos, My oh my the words do flow from you! This is absolutely beautiful. I love that the couple is headed to the marriage union. Very nice with so much emotion and tenderness. Keep em coming dear brother. Love, Skye

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      What a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. So lovely! The flow the discreption are all so wonderful! Voted it up!

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      Sunny River 3 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

      A beautiful piece Romeo. :)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Skye, dear heart; thanks for such wonderfully uplifting commentary sister, and am a firm believer in marriage as a divine institution, the Wisdom of which seems to have not been bettered since it's inception. I'll try to keep 'em flowing in accordance with folk's needs - I suppose some of this could be relevant to you, for you have such beautiful eyes too, dear sister.

      Thank you,

      Love from R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hi James!

      Very pleased that this one appealed my friend, and thank you for your articulate encouragement;

      I hope life is treating you well, and you are alright within yourself.

      All the Best,

      R.Q.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, so very beautiful dearest Romeos! Such sweet, passionate words of that wonderful first wedding night bliss! You words are exquisite as well as the lovely imagery...perfect as always!!!

      Glorious poem!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Dearest Faith Reaper;

      ' Special ' should be given a new definition, with your sweet name emblazened in the description; thank you for introducing us to the absolutely lovely Skye2day on your marvelous Hub, and the day always seems to feel complete, and brighter when you're around, which is a priceless blessing within itself. So pleased you liked the poetic verse, and hope that you feel less tired now, as I felt concerned that maybe you was doing too much, and leaving yourself with no energy.I pray that you may have the energy and strength needed to get through your days unfettered by fatigue, dear heart.

      Thank you so much for your blessings, and may you and your family continue to be blessed in like fashion.

      With Warmest Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Martin Kloess 3 years ago from San Francisco

      Well put together love song. thank you

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

      "Cherry-stung lips." A phrase like this speaks to all the senses. You have an amazing word-smith ability. Thanks for sharing!

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Flattered that you would think that it could be a song Mhatter99; thank you, and best wishes for a pleasant evening;

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      You're very welcome Ms Dora, and it is wonderful folk as yourself that make it worthwhile.

      Have a marvelous remainder of the day, and many thank you's for an extremely touching commentary.

      With Kindest Regards,

      R.Q.

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      Suzette Walker suzettetaos 3 years ago from Taos, NM

      Very beautiful and so well written. What a lovely wedding day poem to read to your bride. You have a way with words. The images are gorgeous also. So romantic.

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      Diana Grant 3 years ago from London

      You have a wonderful vocabulary.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you Diana Grant, and always pleased to meet wonderful, new people on these Hubpages.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      HappyMikeWritter 3 years ago

      Your work inspires me. As a non english native I love to read poems like yours. It helps me to learn the connection of the words in the most beautiful way as not many can do.

      Thank yu for making poems alive and world thinking :-)

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thanks Mike - I enjoyed reading a couple of your Hub articles recently; very profound in parts.

      Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Gorgeous photos and such a beautifully expressed poem.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you DDE, and the fact that it appealed to you is good news today.

      Wishing you a pleasant weekend, with Kind Regards,

      R.Q.

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