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Still Standing

Updated on September 10, 2013

I stood next to my tree.. and looked as far as I could see

Planets and moons..made my soul swoon

the Lord took me on

this wonderful glide

just my reflection

was what was to be

the horizon swallowed

all that I see

upon yonder clouds

our shadows were dark

like funeral shrouds

it was just you and me

my wonderful tree

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Good reflection and beautiful write as always.

      Have a wonderful day!

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      That photo is stunning, as is your simple and profound poetry. Well done, Michael!

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Wow, what a combination!! Spectacular! Three votes up and sharing!

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      wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

      Lovely, lovely.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, wow, wow ... Stunning and profound piece here dear Michael! I am behind here a bit this day, and I see you have been publishing away, with your amazing poetry as always. The imagery is phenomenal coupled with your beautiful write.

      Really such a blessing to read to wind down the day. This may be my new favorite, until I read your next one!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Hugs and God bless you,

      Faith Reaper

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      So beautiful Michael; voted up and across.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Linda Rogers 3 years ago from Minnesota

      Michael~the combination of the magical photo and powerful poetry, makes this a joy to read. I felt like I was there enjoying this special moment in nature. Hope all is well my talented Writer friend.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Interesting poem - and what a delightful photo!

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      LChristiane 3 years ago from Florida

      short and sweet...yet so much meaning. Beautiful Michael.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Christiane

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