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~~~" T-Time " ~~~

Updated on May 19, 2013

~ " T - Time "


This tasty,timorous,tranquil trophy,

Trailing,tanned,tumbling tresses,

Teasingly toys a textured tippet,that

Thwarts toussled towers of toric tissue.

Tormenting,tactile,touches tingle,like

Tireless,torched tongues in treacled toffee,

Testing tantalized temperatures,that tighten

Turgid twitches of tensioned torture.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Very clever...loved the rhythm to this poem. And so much for that turkey! Voted it awesome! :D

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      writinglover

      Bye Bye turkey!It was nice knowing you(slurp!) lol!!

      Thank you.

      Yours Sincerely,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Impressed as always, though I have to admit... my brain's a little mush right now, so if all goes well and my senses return, I should come back and read it again... where I might have to "google" some of those words :D

      Nicely done,

      Yours Truly

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Are you assaulting poor Google again? lol!Thank you for the pleasant comment.(by the way,I need to talk properly-I'll mail)

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      I have to admit, much of your poetry the heart reads for me, but some of your fabulous pool of word choices does test my intelligence... yes, I have probably burned the "submit" button out at Google :-)

      Don't mention is sugar pie... and yes, I'd appreciate that.

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      Terrific touches of alliteration! Yeah, I could not help doing that ! Great and interesting work!

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Theater girl

      Hey!;thanks a million for your encouraging comment.Enjoy the rest of your evening.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL.... Had fun with this one..... What a tongue twister! Very cleverly done, RQ!

      Up +++++

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      LaThing

      My apologies for the delayed response-only just clicked the comments;I think I've finally mastered this menu,now!

      Thanks very much!I was attempting to simultaneously describe the food,and the fair maiden serving it.Glad you likey!

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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