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~~~ Teasey Wheezy ~~~

Updated on May 30, 2013

~ Teasey Wheezy ~


V1/ Kiss me Krystal;Chill me Misty;

Miss me Marcy;Thrill me Christy.

Choose me Lucy;Lose me Lara;

Sass me Suzy;Love me Clara.


V2/ Feeling fine,Fenula foxy;

Rapping rhyme,for rock-me Roxy.

Tests the zest,but not the best of me,

Alicia,Helen,Grace and Destiny.


V3/ Velvet-voiced,Venetian Valerie,

Classy Carol,who counts the calorie;

Talking tweet,there's no one sweeter,

Than Rubenesque,romantic Rita.


V4/ Take the real,and feel the steal;

Wheel the deal,then steal the seal.

Peel the seal,to feel the real,then

Steal the wheel,and seek the deal.

* Home Edit - ' Pour Some Sugar On Me ' *

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      As soon as I got the notification that you published your new hub, I knew I had to read this and it is sooo clever. I loved the rhythm to this and I found myself giggling as I read it. So, I voted up funny and awesome! :D

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hey! Good to hear from you WL;Glad you liked it,and I bunged a tiny,smattering of humour in there :) Thanks a million, because you are always so kind, and generous when you visit.

      Sincerely Yours,

      R.Q.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      It's been a long time since I even remembered what alliteration is. Thanks for reminding me with these lovely sounds. My favorite? "Velvet-Voiced." Good job!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Oh my!!! :D What a delightful little treat!!! This is so cleverly charming! I smiled throughout, truly enjoying every minute... but that last verse, wow, I read it over and over and over again!!! How darling!!! Awesome, Romeo! You have any other hidden talents? :-)

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      MsDora

      You're very welcome, and thank you for your kind comments.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      Hey! I'll consider myself now to be in the official mouth-lifting business,and I thank you for your always generous and warm remarks,which always spur me on to continue this hobby;and hidden talents?...well...that would be telling, wouldn't it? ;)

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      ...Just had to read it again! :D Gee, one would wonder if you could hurt yourself thinking those thoughts... I, personally, approached with caution ;-)

      Yes, I set myself up for that one :D

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      No grey cells, children, or small animals were hurt in the making of this rhyme :)

      Yours,

      R.Q

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Ha ha ha! Well, that's good to hear... but there was a Cat in danger :D ... luckily it all turned out well :D

      By the way... forgot to mention again, nice touch with the video and song classic :D

      Yours,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      I wouldn't class you as a small animal, but luckily, I'm also in the Cat-saving business. : ) And thanks for your comment on the video;those things take ages to make, so glad it appealed.

      Yours,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Yes, you definitely have a way of saving Cats ;-)

      You're most welcome; those are always wonderful and I sometimes forget to mention them because I am still in awe over your writing. They are excellent, really :D

      Yours,

      Cat

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So very clever and thank you for sharing Romeo.

      Eddy.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you, Eddy, and you're very welcome.

      Enjoy a wonderful weekend in beautifully scenic Wales.

      Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Rosemary Amrhein 4 years ago from Boston, MA

      Interesting love the song :)

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Hey there! Pleased to make your acquaintance blondey.

      Many thanks for your comment, and for dropping by; I look forward to reading some of your articles, and poetic verse soon. : )

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      diogenes 3 years ago from UK and Mexico

      Wow...Giselle.

      "Long of shank and fair of breast

      Sadly, better than my very best."

      Bob

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Diogenes Bob.

      Ha! Ha! That was a good one, and I guess she is a fine-looking woman, but the reality is usually,

      " Short and stout, with puckered pout,

      Home late, again, I've been locked out." lol!

      Thanks a million for dropping by, and have a great, upcoming weekend.

      All the best,

      Romeo's Quill

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