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The Ocean Blue

Updated on August 3, 2012
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Thoughts of Love

I was reading and all of a sudden , you entered my mind. It felt so warm and loving, I knew it was you..... thinking about me.


Your thoughts came to me

from across the Ocean Blue


We lay together naked

me and you..


I felt your heart and soul,

as they came.... burning through


The moon was full...the stars were bright

our bodies were hot ...as I held you tight

You kissed my lips...with all your might


Love exploded...

when we met there

As our bodies floated...

from the hot sands.... into the air.

We came together....melted into One

nothing could stop the passion...

so bright... like the sun


Two people.... One Earth

Across the Ocean Blue

Your love still came to me

and It was so true...


I Love You and Miss You, Baby !!!

Love, Michael




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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      rdsparrow, thank you for the visit. glad you like the poem.

      @spy, thank you for your kind words, I am humbled.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Distance cannot separate hearts that truly cares.. your talent in poetry is awesome!

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      Wow ! The poem is so passionate :) Take care :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Marina, thank you for your kind words. she resides only mentally in my mind, but she is always there. thanks for the visit.

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      Marina Lester 5 years ago

      Aww, very lovely Michael, who is this lucky woman? ;) Very nice, I particularly liked these verses,

      "Love exploded...

      when we met there

      As our bodies floated...

      from the hot sands.... into the air.

      We came together....melted into One

      nothing could stop the passion...

      so bright... like the sun"

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      max, my friend . thank you for your visit. you are maming me blush!

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Steamy romantic =) Passionate fireworks, powerfully beautiful! Amazing. Only Michael can do that =)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      K, you sarcastic wench.! ARGGH, any old port in a storm.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      hmmmm...phone sex? (lol) sorry..i'm a sarcastic wench...lol..

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      well, Miss Harliquinn, thank you for the comments and your expression of my work . happy you have taken the time to visit. keep up your great writing looking forward to more of your poetry.

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      harliquinn 5 years ago

      Beautiful words to express a beautiful emotion. I loved the imagery you used and the pattern. Simply lovely.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      Thank you blossom, for your kind words. glad you like my work.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      The only way to express such deep emotion is in poetry and you have done it well.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine , thank you for your kind comments . i am getting back to my romantic style again for i have been inspired by a special one from across the ocean ..

      Michael

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      KatrineDM 5 years ago

      Michael, what a lovely expression of deep love of two people being apart. They may not be there for each other physically yet they are connected through their feelings and emotions. That is the true power of love, having one another regardless of the distance. Well done for your awesome writing. Keep well.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Annie I always look forward to your opinion of my work. i know it is good when "Annie " likes it . Thanks for the comments.

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      Annie Fenn 5 years ago from Australia

      So powerful, an undying love with a charge of passion across the ocean, this is so beautiful Michael, beautiful true love. The rhythm is just lovely and the visuals mind blowing!!! Awesome poem, my votes and best wishes to you and sharing.