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~ The Perfect Woman ~

Updated on July 19, 2013
" Arrested by beauty,convicted by love;sentenced to life,imprisonment within her heart "
" Arrested by beauty,convicted by love;sentenced to life,imprisonment within her heart "
The Original 'Blonde Bombshell' - Jean Harlow
The Original 'Blonde Bombshell' - Jean Harlow
" Venus In Her Eyes "
" Venus In Her Eyes "



Her hair is the sun,

With Venus in her eyes.

Sparkling orbs of promise,

Like finely polished arrows

That pierce my heart,

And circled with lashes,

Like unto the petals of a daisy.


Cascading locks of Angel gold

Tumble across her shoulders

Of finely hewn mahogany,

And sway,enticingly,

Enveloping her swan-like neck,

Wrapped in skin of the finest porcelain.


Her soft lips soothe my pain,

And are more refreshing than the morning dew.

Limbs are as the Willow,

Gently bending in the wind;

Bosoms,like two pure white canoodling doves

Announce her womanly presence is near,

And proudly displayed with consummate zest.


Her waist is cinched,like the stem on a champagne flute,

Which pronounces her curving hips,

Jutting,like gently rolling hills.

Statuesque legs,like pillars of marbled perfection,

Yet sleek,and graceful as an impala,

Pedestalled by delicate Cinderella feet

Of intricately carved ivory.

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      epigramman 3 years ago

      Well hello Mister Romeo of the Golden Quill and you certainly must be the perfect romantic poet , that's for sure.

      I don't know about the perfect woman part. I think that's best left to a man's imagination although with your perfect writing it would be 'poetic catnip' for any young lady.

      So nice to meet you my friend and warm wishes sent to you from Colin and his cats at lake erie time ontario canada 10:15pm

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      epigramman

      Thank you for the warm welcome;I'm pleased to make your acquaintance,and that of your furry friends.

      This was the vision of beauty that I beheld of the perfect(complete) woman,which captured my imagination at the time of writing.

      I agree,about that perfection being subjective;that what a man sees,and whom he would like to be with are seldom the same.

      I shall certainly be taking a look at more of your work,which sports a unique excellence.

      Enjoy a pleasant evening my friend,and thank you for your positive introduction,and making me feel welcome.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill (with bloodshot eyes,at an ungodly hour!)

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      epigramman 3 years ago

      I just poured myself a nice glass of Guinness and I am listening to some mighty loud music at Colin's groovy jazz cafe and I am toasting to your health and happiness .... and off now to read another one from your fabulous quill ....

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      To good health,happiness,and her!

      Your groovy jazz cafe sounds like the place to be.

      Take care,new friend.

      R.Q.

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 3 years ago from Philippine

      Like your perfect woman. I am sure it all represents the will of every man to meet her. Great job, good Poet.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      PaoloJpm

      Many thanks,for your comment.I'll be sure to take a look at your work.

      Enjoy your day,

      Romeo's Quill

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      John Paolo B.Magdaluyo 3 years ago from Philippine

      thank you,glad to accommodate you on tour with my works.

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      Jose Velasquez 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      You have some high expectations my friend. Either you're describing someone you already have, or someone you can never have. I have similar taste accept I like my women much curvier.

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      I've been in a relationship with a model before PHILLYDREAMER, but even they come in all shapes and sizes.The M. Monroe type seems like the kind of girl who'd float your boat, and who can blame you?

      All the best,

      R.Q.

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      Jose Velasquez 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      You hit the nail right on the head.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      What a lovely poem describing your beautiful and "perfect" woman in your eyes.

      I am sure if she read this, you would be her "perfect" man.

      Hugs,

      Faith Reaper

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      Romeos Quill 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      That's very kind of you to say Faith; I doubt such a woman exists, and would probably be highly unrealistic to expect a single woman to contain all of these stunning attributes, and could be unfair to her to expect such ' perfection ', but I guess one can always dream lol! To place her on such a lofty plinth would make her unreachable anyway, but the ideal of such ' perfection ' certainly fires ones heart and senses - perhaps it's the same for women too, but I don't know about that.

      Thank you again, Faith Reaper, by whom I feel fortunate for you alighting a second time this day.

      Sincerely, With Affection,

      R.Q.

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