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~ The Unforgiving Teacher ~

Updated on May 11, 2013

~ Experience ~

One late autumn afternoon,I saw a timid wind;a woman,no less,and sorrow was her name.To my surprise,her see-through arms swept me up,and carried away this perplexed soul towards a sombre,shadowy place,full of regret,and chagrin.

Lowered by a silent,gentle gust,then escorted through a Dickensian tour over the cemetery of broken dreams,she ushered me to a gleaming new,forbidding headstone,bearing the chiselled legend,

" Here lies the orphan

Successful disaster;

Doomed here to lie,now

Forever after.

Never again,shall she suffer still-birth,

For the father,thereof,

Has been issued his worth. "


Whistles of excitement could be heard,as she whipped into a frenzied whirl,then lifted this travelling phantom to the bosom of her typhoon,towards her lover,'cumulus',whence she unceremoniously discarded this soaring spectre upon her aerial cotton,where he lay,in dormant slumber,until the wind changed her name.


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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      Just wonderful! I love how you put words together...so perfectly that the images appear before me as I read!

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Theater girl

      Your comments are very encouraging,and I'm glad that it appealed to you.

      Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      You are most welcome!

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Theater girl

      You have impeccable,and beautiful manners;such a lady.

      Here's wishing you an exciting weekend.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A great share which shows off your talent. Keep them coming;great hub.

      Eddy.

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      This was amazing! Voted it up awesome!

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      writinglover

      Thank you for your generous comment.Have a lovely weekend.

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Wow, you've rendered me damn near speechless and that is quite a feat! :-)

      How beautiful! It doesn't seem to matter where you're going, but you have a way of taking people with you. I truly become lost in your words and images. Romeo... you are my hero! Until we meet again!

      Hugs and kisses from and adoring fan,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Thank you,Eddy.As long as the quill flows,I'll try to keep them coming.

      Wishing you a blessed,and peaceful weekend;

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      We'll meet again when I find you in these lost words,and images.....

      Thanks,blossom.Truly you are a Duchess amongst women.

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      I dub thee "taker of my heart"... now what you do with it is up to you... so far, so good! ;-)

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      I would treat your dear heart like my own,and handle it as I would a new-born babe.To confirm this,I have some words,a narrative I would like to discourse to you,which I will post in a Hub entitled," Never Stop."

      If other people like it then that is all well and good,but this one is for you.

      Now,let both beat, to the rhythm of love.

      Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Oh my goodness, is okay to fall in love over the computer???? :-)

      Boy, I don't know if you have any idea what you're doing to me... I am truly honored and I will be anxiously anticipating this new arrival.

      Thank you dear

      Cat

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