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~~~ Thursday Surprise ~~~

Updated on May 16, 2013

~ Thursday Surprise ~



Reminiscing,once upon a rhyme,

Sweet moments,caught up,in mists of time.

Like a melting doll,eyes burning bright,

I kissed your name,under a moonlit night.

Attempts,upon reality inversion,

Warrant swift,and sure,attack incursion.

If life,decides to wave goodbye,

My dream,would still be you,and I.


Those baby blues,throw me good news,

Of treasure,you bury deep;

Inside,you hide,some wounded pride,

In a heart,but once,replete.

New York Emo,an urban queen,'O

Driving this heat,you're street,so sweet.

Discard your bellows,they're making me sweat,

For embraces,from my concrete,Juliet.....

~ Romeo & Juliet ~

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      As always, truly awesome work here, Romeo! Voted it up awesome!

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Oh Romeo, Romeo, can I play Juliet? This is beautiful... I almost cried... wait, wait, what is this warm wet sensation running down my cheek?

      'If life, decides to wave goodbye' ...? No, never, never will life wave goodbye... this kind of love doesn't end.

      You're really making it hard to get back out to my garden... but that's okay, there is more beauty growing here! ;-)

      Yours Truly,

      Cat

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      writinglover

      I liked your little poem to dedicated to your nephew-very touching,and sweet.Thanks for your generous comment.

      Kind Regards,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Jennifer 4 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      Thank you for YOUR kind words, R.Q!

      --WL

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Cat

      You can play Juliet,if it pleases you :) This was a spur-of-the-moment publish,but I'm happy that you liked it.And yes...tend your garden,before the sun puts on his dark glasses,and the butterflies are tucked up in bed. :)

      Yours Truly,

      R.Q.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      R.Q.

      Well, I don't want to play Juliet if it only pleases me :-)

      Just kidding... spur of the moment huh? Well aren't you quite impressive!!! Yes, yes you are. I'm going, I'm going... the sun will be out there waiting to greet me. :-)

      Yours,

      Cat

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I like the passion in this one. Love has a way of making us blind to everything else.

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      PHILLYDREAMER

      Thanks for the support,man.It is a many-splendoured thing,making you do things that one wouldn't do normally,but I sure wouldn't want to be without it.Enjoy the rest of your day,

      Yours Sincerely,

      Romeo's Quill

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