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Two People In Love: Haiku Poem About Passion

Updated on January 13, 2016
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Jo has been an ITU nurse at the London North West NHS Trust for 14 years. She obtained her RN at University College London Hospital.

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You make my heart whole

When your love caressed my soul

See how I tremble


Incoherently

I mumbled as you pass by

You make me tongue-tied


Love shine in your eyes

Your enigmatic smile, begs

How long will it last


I’ll tell you, my love-

Eternity will be ours

Love is forever

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Fervently, we kissed

Lips entwined, hearts beating fast

United in love

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Blondey, nice to see you!...thanks for stopping by, much appreciated.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 4 years ago from Boston, MA

      Nice!

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Voronwe, You are having a busy day. I thought Damon needed just a little help with this one. Take care now.

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      Great words of passion! "When your love caressed my soul..." - seriously lost it right there!

      (As if Damon Salvatore didn't do the job kindly enough! :-) !!)

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      The original Eman 5 years ago from london

      No problem at all, your poems are steamy miss i must find a woman to read them too lol.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Thank you Eman, You rocks!!

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      The original Eman 5 years ago from london

      Mate this is some intensive passion of love i must say lol. The pictures worked wonders again and i'm glad i read this :)

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Very passionate!

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Wonderful love haiku's - full of passion!

      Voted up/beautiful and shared.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Blossom, thank you so much for the generous comment. Have a lovely day.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Tireless traveler, thank you for taking the time to stop by on your travelling to leave this lovely comment.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Five lovely, sensitive haiku poems! Quite a feast.

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      Judy Specht 5 years ago from California

      Very beautiful. Intense.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Oh, what beautiful sensual images you painted here, tobusiness! Awesome job!

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Impassioned !!! Voted up across the board. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Indeed very passionate Haiku . love this..a passionate thing , a divine thing ! Voted up !

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      LailaK 5 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      I like your poem a lot! Very intense and the rhyme scheme is awesome! Very well-done! Voted up :) Loving the pictures also!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Passionate! loved it... fascinating clicks

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Intense passion of lovers overwhelms me.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      cleaner3, thank you so much for the visit, and for the much appreciated wow. best regards

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Wow, very nice work. i like it.

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