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Mesmerized

Updated on January 14, 2012

Her lips, they are honey,

Her eyes, stars in space

.Her skin, smooth as velvet

God puts everything in it's place


I stare at your picture

A woman who is more than just a pretty face

Beauty, brains, and a talent with words

Together God has laced.


The only way to express myself

is to write these words of praise

and if my poetry fits you

your self esteem i hope I raised


It's not like you need it, The praise, The words,

You have heard it all before.

your sweetness is better than any candy

I can find in a candy store.







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      LChristiane 5 years ago from Florida

      I love what you wrote for her. Very good job.

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      Thank you cleaner3 :)

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      same to you! Thanks! :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you rdsparrow, I love your picture on your bio, that is so imaginative.

      I also admire your work.

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      rdsparrowriter 5 years ago

      so cute :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I just want to say to Caroline, Vix, and Nicole

      I love you all!!!!!!

      Your poetry and stories inspire me

      Thank you.

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      great tribute to a beautiful lady!

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      poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      What a lovely tribute!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Caroline, This is my expression of Gratitude

      For all the inspiration and support.

      Much Love.

      Michael

      @thank you, Phoebe I am also looking at your Hub.

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      Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

      Wow. A sweet poem.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Wow Michael. I love this. I am flattered. Very sweet of you. :)